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Jan 06, 2017 18:20

From as quiet an inner space as the back of the mission van would give up, Rhiannon struggled to maintain a firm hold on her reflective calm.  Chepi, like a caged tiger, was showing signs of restlessness; Ezra was on his laptop, in contact with Donatella and Galen - other members of Vito’s crew - while his bodyguards, Anezka and Ondrej, perched in ( Read more... )

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sinnamongirl January 10 2017, 08:52:48 UTC
This is so great!!

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mamas_minion January 10 2017, 20:10:32 UTC
Thank you

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eternal_ot January 10 2017, 15:13:51 UTC
A great read. Has kept me hooked till the end and now waiting for your next instalment. Good Job!

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mamas_minion January 10 2017, 20:11:32 UTC
Thank you

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bleodswean January 10 2017, 16:10:57 UTC
So great to see that you're able to write your installments with use of the prompts! As always, your dialogue flows like water!

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mamas_minion January 10 2017, 20:12:38 UTC
thank you, I have been lucky with the prompts so far as they have fitted into the story I am trying to tell.

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my_name_is_jenn January 10 2017, 20:42:13 UTC
Very well done. :)

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mamas_minion January 10 2017, 23:39:40 UTC
Thank you

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kajel January 10 2017, 22:45:05 UTC
Nice job! I'm with halfshellvenus, wondering about Vito.

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mamas_minion January 10 2017, 23:41:13 UTC
Thank you, Vito is one of my favorite Characters to write.

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