She Sings the Body Mechanic

Jan 15, 2017 17:08

This was the address he had been given by the old sawbones... he double-checked the slip again, just to be sure.  But how could this be right?  This place looked like a respectful clinic, not the kind of back alley shack he’d have expected an old sawbones to be associated with.  But there it was in front of him... this was the spot.  Deandre went ( Read more... )

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rayaso January 16 2017, 23:59:04 UTC
Things are getting fascinating! I love the talking skull, and the other details. Great addition.

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mamas_minion January 17 2017, 00:11:16 UTC
Thank you the talking skull is a character that I have wanted to introduce for awhile now.

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magazhchi January 17 2017, 03:52:00 UTC

I too loved Hisakawa's character. Amazing read.

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mamas_minion January 17 2017, 18:35:51 UTC
Thank you, I wasn't sure how people were going to react to Hisakawa I am glad you like him.

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halfshellvenus January 17 2017, 03:56:43 UTC
This one was a lot of fun! I wasn't even sure if it was part of the same universe as the others at first, because it really grabbed me (the skull cracked me up) and the more 'heist'-oriented entries less so.

So, the brain in the jar didn't seem to say anything. I still kind of wonder whether anyone is "at home" in it.

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mamas_minion January 17 2017, 18:36:36 UTC
Thank you for reading, the brain is inside the skull and there is someone very much at home there!

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eternal_ot January 17 2017, 10:47:00 UTC
Heh! This was a FUN read, I really enjoyed the addition of new characters. Great dialogues. Would love to see these people back..esp. the talking brain :D Great going!

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mamas_minion January 17 2017, 18:37:18 UTC
thanks, You will be seeing more of them

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penpusher January 18 2017, 07:38:21 UTC
Always terrific, never expected. And always captivating.

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mamas_minion January 18 2017, 18:52:11 UTC
Thank you

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