Dark Discovery

Feb 21, 2017 18:57

Casimiro shifted in the leather seat of his mid-sized midnight blue sedan, trying to work the circulation back into his lower half.  He’d been parked here in stakeout mode for hours, waiting for Dr. Karen Strathmore to finish her workday, hoping she might have more valuable information for him tonight than she did last night ( Read more... )

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eternal_ot February 23 2017, 08:18:31 UTC
Ah! The plot thickens.This made for an interesting read. Nice take on the prompt as well.

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mamas_minion February 23 2017, 21:44:33 UTC
Thank you.

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penpusher February 23 2017, 13:12:38 UTC
You exponentially upped the stakes for everybody! Congratulations.

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mamas_minion February 23 2017, 21:53:29 UTC
I have upped the ante a little bit. We will see how things go from here.

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rayaso February 23 2017, 16:14:00 UTC
Ah, vampires, bio-weapons, and spies, not to mention unknown half-siblings! What a great stew of a plot -- the names alone nearly wore out my "search Google for" button. You moved the action along crisply, and left me wanting to read more, as usual. Great job!

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mamas_minion February 23 2017, 21:55:24 UTC
thank you, it has been awhile since the spies have done any spying so I figured it was time for them to go back.

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tonithegreat February 24 2017, 00:16:30 UTC
You've got quite the cast of characters to keep up with here! But they all come across distinctly. Nice work!

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mamas_minion February 24 2017, 03:24:47 UTC
Thank you. I figured it was time to introduce Vito's kids into the story line.

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halfshellvenus February 24 2017, 06:43:40 UTC
I am oddly pleased to see the return of the Head Doctor.

When you have a bio-weapon for every segment of the population, it begins to seem as if you'll be auctioning off the future to the highest bidder.

And will probably eventually be in one of the targeted groups yourself, even if it seems unlikely at the present. That is because iron is a bitch...

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mamas_minion February 24 2017, 21:24:14 UTC
To true but some people thin we have to burn the world down and start over.

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