Been busy at Smashwords

[mamaslyth]

My profile - http://www.smashwords.com/profile/view/adbarncord

I currently have one free short story up and a not-free anthology of short stories from different genres. Nothing from NaNoWriMo is up there yet. Still need feedback from fresh eyes on the latest story.

Comments

[cat_irix]

Wow, you certainly have been busy!

What kind of feedback you're looking for? I can catch spelling mistakes, but I'm no good with grammar and the creative writing stuff (e.g. if the characterization is adequate, descriptions are descriptive enough, etc).

[mamaslyth]

I've gotten the spelling part already taken care of, unless I misspelled one of my own made up names. I basically just want to know if my series of short stories works at painting a larger meta-story.