Invisible Bonds - Chapter 15

[mamishka_fic]

Title: Invisible Bonds - Chapter 15
Length: 5,331 this chapter
Pairing: Sherlock/John, currently one-sided and purely platonic
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: None
Disclaimer: AU world/OCs are mine, but I (sadly) do not own the world of BBC Sherlock in which this fic blatantly plays.

Summary: In a world where myth, mystery, and the supernatural flourish

Comments

[susanwerewolf]

That was lovely!:) And I love your Harry, she's annoying as hell, but also seriously cool (and observant, so very very observant...):D

[mamishka_fic]

Thank you! I wanted to depict Harry as someone capable, despite her alcoholism. Most alcoholics I've known have been on the surface highly charismatic, capable people. It's only when you get close to them that you see the cracks and damage. Most people seem to depict her as a wild, crazy drunk, or a pathetic one. I definitely did not want to go in that direction. So it's good to know that she's annoying as hell, but pretty interesting despite that. ;)

[kristinaa1]

Is that brian may in your icon? big queen fan so had to ask....i don't think i've seen that pic of him before.

[susanwerewolf]

Oh yes, it's him:) My first (and definitely not the last) obsession:D

[numberthescars]

Can I just say again how much I love your portrayal of Harry and John in this chapter? I can't wait to see how their relationship will develop in the future. <3

[mamishka_fic]

If it develops....

MWUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! >;)

Thank you so much. Your comments and corrections were, as always, wonderful to read and spot on. :) I'm so happy to have you as my beta. :) *hugs!*

[marlfox580]

Ooooh, I like your Harry! Her flaws give her depth and make her appear human instead of the crazy, raving, mad character she is usually portrayed as. Also, surprise-badass-Harriet is AWESOME!

I like how you gave her some of Sarah's lines but at the same time she was still completely Harry. It works very well in the story.

I don't think I mentioned this before but I love that you've made John the angel and Watson the man and put them together. My favorite line in this chapter was when John turned Harry's question over to Watson because he didn't know how to answer it. It's a very interesting situation.

As always, love your series and looking forward to reading more. :)

[kristinaa1]

still loving this fic.....i can't wait to see what sherlocks reaction is when he learns or deduces who john really is! :-) I also loved the interaction between john and harry here. :-)

[ariss_tenoh]

I recently discovered this series. Am eagerly waiting for the next part.