tension comes in all forms, sunggyu/woohyun, r

Sep 03, 2011 02:00

OH LOOK GUYS, I FINISHED SOMETHING! After, what, six months fhdjsfd. Uh, I don't know what it is about Woohyun and Sunggyu that makes me weak in the knees but it is really quite absurd, BUT THAT'S OKAY IF IT GETS MY PRODUCTIVE JUICES FLOWING. \O/ Since I haven't posted anything proper since March, it's likely that my writing skills are ( Read more... )

sunggyu/woohyun, r, infinite, fanfiction

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bloodyrose2442 September 2 2011, 18:53:28 UTC
Omo this was just- you have such a great writing style~ I mean I just read this whole thing on one breath- it was interesting and it had such a nice flow~

Love the way you express yourself dear- you have quite the talent~

Thank you so so much for sharing this great fic with us <3

Btw you wouldn't mind me quoting a few of my fave moments right?

The kiss was tentative and desperate, a mixture of emotions rocking through Sunggyu, and Woohyun really needed to let go of his shirt unless he wanted Sunggyu's sexual drive to take over completely. He, oh, that felt good, yeah.

Your description here and the way you expressed Sunggyu's thoughts- flawless ^^

He tasted chocolate and something slightly minty, and even though he should, he couldn't give a damn about the calories the chocolate came with, especially not when Woohyun was doing that thing with his tongue, which felt really, really, painfully illegal.

This part is just- god I love it <3 It's my fave one probably~

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mammothcock September 7 2011, 01:51:27 UTC
oh thank you so much! that's a pretty big compliment, given i haven't written anything in ages. i'm glad my writing skills haven't gotten too bad.

ahaha that part actually felt a little awkward to me! i'm glad you think otherwise.

chocolate and mint is actually one of my favourite tastes together. ♥ thank you for the lovely comment!

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she_devil666 September 2 2011, 19:32:38 UTC
that was kinda borderline hot. i like ^^ i really liked the constant tug-o-war going on between them. kinda made it hotter ;) i'm glad you got this finished. it was very good! i hope you write more!

p.s.- you're username caught me off guard XD i don't expect to see something like that when i'm not expecting it lol

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mammothcock September 7 2011, 04:19:58 UTC
i think a power struggle between two guys, especially in a romantic relationship, would be pretty common. this is even more so for sunggyu and woohyun, since they can both be pretty authoritative at times.

ahaha i get that a lot, i hope it amused you at least? thank you so much for the encouragement! i really appreciate it.

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bloodtaki2 September 2 2011, 19:35:28 UTC
... Words. My vocabulary suddenly lacks of adjectives to qualify this fic. It's just... I don't know. I loved it. I loved the flow and the tension. I would like to write a more coherent comment but all I manage to say it that it was great! ;A;

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mammothcock September 7 2011, 04:20:57 UTC
your comment's pretty coherent to me! thank you so much for your kind words, i'm really glad you liked it.

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aa_koliqizm192 September 2 2011, 19:55:32 UTC
aw.
aw.
you have to write a lot more woogyu~
this is awesome.
this is-this is- *at the verge of tears*
I loved this *bookmarks*

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mammothcock September 7 2011, 04:27:20 UTC
oh thank you! i'm glad you liked it.

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mammothcock September 7 2011, 04:28:18 UTC
that's great, i was just aiming for that!

wait, there's a video footage of them backstage? i haven't seen that yet. ;;

i know! there's just something about them that makes me want to ship them forever, haha.

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