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rebreak, as usual, who requested "domesticfic! anyone/anyone really~ grocery shopping; doing the laundry; arguing over the tv; snuggling; kissing; etc. happyyyy" for Christmas, which I've started early and will be posting in parts to kick myself to completion. SO FAR I HAVE ACCOMPLISHED EVERYTHING EXCEPT THE LAST TWO. AHA.
As always, Dana, you are the
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my thoughts for the whole woohyun-perving-on-sungyeol-masturbating scene went straight to this JIHO IS ALWAYS RELEVANT!!!! but unfff~ *___* woohyun listening to sungyeol. he should join him instead, though. ♥ sungyeol wouldn't miiiiiiind ( ... )
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sungyeol would have kicked him out, js.
tbh i never found sungjong that pretty. he has a glorious complexion, sure, but his jaw is too masculine to come off as pretty! WAIT TILL HE GROWS INTO THAT JAW. HE'D BE AS MANLY AS HOWON. i appreciate making you wobbly and giggly. wobbly and giggly dana makes me happy and want to attack you with hugs.
BECAUSE WOOHYUN IS STILL A BIT UNCOMFORTABLE WITH THE WHOLE GAY IDEA, CLEARLY. he does not identify as homosexual. he identifies as sungyeolsexual.
YOU'VE KNOWN ME SINCE MAY, DANA, THE ANSWER IS PRETTY OBVIOUS. i am all for happy endings. it would be sad if happy endings didn't happen in fic. rl provides more than enough sad endings. BUT YOU HAVE THE BEST WIPS. LIKE THAT ZIKYUNG FIC, AND THE BL-MANGA FIC, WHICH I MUST HAVE FOR CHRISTMAS. AND YOU'RE WORKING ON WOOGYU TOO? you are wonderful, i love you. ♥
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anyway, thank you! :D
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Over all I liked it a lot! I always feel like I should leave better comments but I'm not especially good at that or especially good at critiquing.
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it's fine! i appreciate every comment. thank you! ♥
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Woohyun eyed Sungyeol apprehensively, who appeared to be in raptures over a bar of Cadbury chocolate. Terrifying.
I mean...I was in a fit of giggles after that!
And I'm really not sure exactly what it was that brought me to say that. Something in the beginning dialogue? The way I was feeling at that moment. Hmm, but maybe you're right. It fits this situation. This world.
Anyway, love it and write faster on the next part! ;)
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perhaps because woohyun was so against the usage of trolleys? but really, i treasure all your opinions! ... that sounded a little strange. i mean, you might not be able to articulate yourself, but there's bound to be some reason or another for it. i just have to figure out what it is, and at the same time improve on my characterisation. :|
oh god the next part will be the last part, okay. THE LAST.
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now I'm speculating. sungyeol lying? threesomes? (yes please) more than 3 parts? woohyun jacks off to his dirty sungyeol dreams and lives in heartbreak? the plot thickens ohoho.
This may be rude so you don't have to answer, but can we have an expected/tentative date for part 3?
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oh no, you're not being rude! don't worry. hmm, i'm not sure myself. two weeks from now, perhaps?
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i dunno, i really like their character in this, the dynamic of them as roommate. gosh, woohyun is in the middle of confirming his sexuality and then sunggyeol drop the news about him and myungsoo and i'm really glad that woohyun is jealous (even if he won't admit it) but now i felt bad for woohyun. because now that sunggyeol is taken, what would he do?
i can't wait for the next part, hope you'll be able to post it soon!
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woohyun will deal, i'm sure! i'm glad you liked their dynamics. i tried to make the both of them as entertaining together as possible.
aw, thank you for reading and commenting!
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