the art of freeloading (part three b)

[mammothcock]

 Part Three A 

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[tulita]

weeps. this fic is really everything sungyeol/woohyun is to me, their banter, their misunderstandings, their pride, everything. love love love this. :)

[tulita]

oh oh oh and SUNGGYU. and THE GIRLFRIEND/WIFE. sunggyu was perfect to the t. ;~;

[mammothcock]

their pride! it's great you touched on that point -- i really tried to bring that across, especially for woohyun.

i wasn't so sure about bringing sunggyu's romantic life into the plot at first, so i'm really glad you liked it. thank you for your comment!

[tulita]

so i read this again. i mean, i've already read it several times, but it's just as good, if not better, every time! that line about their dicks pressing against each other though, omg i love it hahaha. and every time i do read it, i appreciate sunggyu being woven into this story even more. i don't know if it's just because i really like sunggyu and love everything that happens to him in this fic (well him just getting married), but i think he proves to be a wonderful and well-used... like, comparison? that's not the right word, but just someone else that's not woohyun and sungyeol, so i can i guess put perspective or something like it about the pair

[ptitmouton812]

THIS FICTION WAS AWESOME! It was nbcjskdicnyvjkdcnfgkgdvrfof ngkcdfgvfjkfhgdhjfindgqvhn odkvgbfgjfun yndfne

[mammothcock]

oh, no, it's not genius, i'm sure! but thank you very much!

[saracupcaked]

i really liked how this panned out! especially the part where woohyun kisses sungyeol and he doesn't give in so easily. the banter and the myungyeol and the ending, in particular The Exploration of Woohyun's Sexuality, all ties in together really nicely across three parts.

thank you for this!

[mammothcock]

i really like your comments! they're very perceptive, and basically i get the feeling we've got similar tastes in fic, like:

especially the part where woohyun kisses sungyeol and he doesn't give in so easily.
i am all for fluff, but i do hate it when things get too unrealistic, like character A and B flying at each other screaming love confessions at the top of their voices. like woohyun predicted, sungyeol took the kiss the wrong way -- cue more drama!

i'm glad you think i wrapped it up well, though i won't deny that a few scenes from part one were probably redundant. thank you for your comment!

[saracupcaked]

lol ia! angst is probably my most favourite genre ever because rl sucks most of the time and people hardly ever get what they want, but excessive angst where the characters just never see eye to eye and there are always things that get in the way is frustrating as well. which is why i liked this so much - it ends happily yet it was done really realistically! especially the banter omg.

i hope you write more infinite :)

[mammothcock]

PRECISELY. there is of course an elusive line between realism (which goes hand-in-hand with angst, tbh) and over-dramatics that tv dramas don't seem capable of observing BUT I DIGRESS. a happy ending just cannot be happy without a contrast in the fic! realism was one of the aspects i was focusing on, so i'm really glad to know i pulled it off.

auuuughhhh. the amount of brain juice i've used for writing has reached its limit, i think, but this is a big compliment coming from you; thank you so much!

[mammothcock]

that was actually supposed to, uh, break the mood to give way to woohyun's I AM INSANE realisation but nevertheless! this sounds like a compliment so thank you.

oh yes i am so glad you caught that! i tried to make woohyun's struggle with the acceptance of his sexuality obvious within the confines of his actions and words without actually stating it, like through his difficulty with accepting sungyeol's sexuality as 'normal'.

honestly speaking, i was a little afraid readers would be put off by the length of my fics -- it seems readers in kfandom have a shorter attention span than those of other fandoms -- so i'm really glad you didn't find this a bore! i find part three A pretty draggy myself.

thank you for your brilliant comment.

[sven2ity]

/CRIES AT THIS
/CRIES FOREVER
/FILLS A BUCKET WITH MY TEARS AND DUMPS IT ON YOU
ASDFGHJKL
WHAT IS THIS THING CALLED 'COHERENCY' THAT YOU SPEAK OF I THINK I MAY HAVE KNOWN IT LONG AGO BUT IT IS LOST TO ME NOW

omggg i just read all the parts (albeit a bit spread out through the day but still) and nnngh i wanted to leave a comment for each of them but i'm lazy i was on fiiiire bro! so i'm going to try to cram everything in here
beginning with this:

[mammothcock]

WIPES SELF WITH TOWEL............

according to dictionary.com,
co·her·ence   [koh-heer-uhns]
noun
logical interconnection; overall sense or understandability.
COHERENCY CAN EASILY BE REPLACED WITH GIFSPAM, WHICH YOU SEEM TO HAVE DEMONSTRATED MOST SPLENDIDLY.

LOL THIS, UH, BALD HEADED SQUEALING FANBOY IS FANTASTIC. i like the sense you make.

I LOVE SUNGGYU CAN YOU TELL? woohyun cannot fathom why he remains friends with him.

FANS SELF WITH WET TOWEL! i love your feedback and i'm really glad sungyeol and woohyun's characters speak so well to you -- to be completely honest with you i think characterisation is my WORST POINT at writing, followed by description, and it really flatters me to know you've gotten such a strong impression of sungyeol and woohyun!

i love how through the whole fic it kind of felt more like he was fighting with his sexuality rather than the actual 'fact' sungyeol had a 'boyfriend'. that and his fears of losing everything he ever strives foraugh THANK YOU. these two things were exactly what i was aiming