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manamaraya
Soothsayer of Pontis
Sep 29, 2009 09:40
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Story writing no one will actually read <3
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dracothrope
September 29 2009, 17:06:47 UTC
"...theirs a guy who could tell you the future of the city"
Should be 'there's a guy', otherwise, everything looks good!
I'm curious to see how this turns out. XD I assume not-so-well... great stuff!
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manamaraya
September 29 2009, 18:21:01 UTC
ah! Thanks for reading it, Miss! 8D <33
And thanks for catching that typo 8U <3
I'm glad you dig so far 8DD
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missushow
September 29 2009, 21:58:49 UTC
"At this moment in time, she was unhappy."
Bit cheesy. This is looking good. I dare say you've got some nice characterization since the bginning. Story elements are intense as well!
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manamaraya
September 29 2009, 21:59:55 UTC
GLAD TO HEAR, MA'AM <333!
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Should be 'there's a guy', otherwise, everything looks good!
I'm curious to see how this turns out. XD I assume not-so-well... great stuff!
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And thanks for catching that typo 8U <3
I'm glad you dig so far 8DD
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"At this moment in time, she was unhappy."
Bit cheesy. This is looking good. I dare say you've got some nice characterization since the bginning. Story elements are intense as well!
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