I like it; reminiscient of a bunch of stuff.. sexually confessive poetry is generally appealing anyway.. it has some kind of intrinsic aesthetic sensibility. However kinda reminds me of some strange amalgam of the last 20 someodd pages of Joyce's Ulysees, the evening orgasm "and I said Yes!" stream of consciousness passsage..( even if you havent read it and dont care to delve into it, its quite lovely and certainly worty of the scan).. yeah the end of Ulysees meets: a more structured and not so coarse feminine equivalent of Bukowski, meets: a kind of slam poetry thing....
god alice. i'm so happy you post these words you make me miss a time long ago when all that stick to memory is your poetry. i miss hearing you read it.
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I like it; reminiscient of a bunch of stuff.. sexually confessive poetry is generally appealing anyway.. it has some kind of intrinsic aesthetic sensibility.
However kinda reminds me of some strange amalgam of the last 20 someodd pages of Joyce's Ulysees, the evening orgasm "and I said Yes!" stream of consciousness passsage..( even if you havent read it and dont care to delve into it, its quite lovely and certainly worty of the scan).. yeah the end of Ulysees meets: a more structured and not so coarse feminine equivalent of Bukowski, meets: a kind of slam poetry thing....
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i'm so happy you post these words
you make me miss a time long ago when all that stick to memory is your poetry.
i miss hearing you read it.
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