Fic Chap.1: The Sweetest Day of the Week

Sep 28, 2007 14:48

Title: The Sweetest Day of the Week (SDW ( Read more... )

bitchy, dbsk, mpreg, crack, jaeho

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sly_pantera September 28 2007, 21:57:47 UTC
Luckily for Yunho, he was very good looking, and luckily for Yunho, Jaejoong gets distracted easily. Pretty soon Jae had an idea of what happened on the floor of the laundry room. And on the machine. And against the wall. And now Jae felt the need to wash those tangled pants again.

ROFL, I love that!! XDD

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mandapandabug September 30 2007, 01:58:09 UTC
i love it when people quote!!!! i love quotes!!! and i love people who love my quotes!!! i work hard on those!!! YYAAAAAYY!!!! someone actually understood my story!!! and this chapter!!! way to be awesome. and for commenting! i love that!!! thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you!!!! ^_^

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ara_niey September 28 2007, 22:45:47 UTC
bwahaha!!~
jae was sooo..i dunno..keeps blabbering about the same thing on every single laundry day..that was cute for me~*wink*

yunho sure had his own way on jae..always..ne?hehe~♥

i always love mpreg fic..funny in some way but still acceptable for my brain..haha~
more please!!~^_^

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mandapandabug September 30 2007, 01:56:19 UTC
and more you shall get!!! man... you are too awesome for me... thank you for commenting... i feel so loved... i wasn't going to write anything either... luckiily i was inspired by the lack of bitchy mpreg... just happy ones.. pregnancy isn't THAT happy is it? fat ankles and bakc problems... poor Jae!!!! hehehehehe thank you again!!!

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chaosmyth September 28 2007, 23:38:19 UTC
This is...a bit confusing. @__@ The laundry part was rather hard to understand in places, and Jae's characterization/thoughts are a bit extreme and over the top, IMHO. It was fun enough to read, though. XD

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mandapandabug September 30 2007, 01:53:42 UTC
yeah... i'm a bit over the top... and Jae will be in this fic... and i wrote the first chapter really weird... the other chapters will be... more.. understandable. and hopefully just as fun to read!!!! thank you for bothering to comment... that was nice of you. XD (what does IMHO stand for?)

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fantasylove4ev September 29 2007, 00:00:58 UTC
poor yunnie. wait is jaejoong topping in this fic cause i mostly only read fics in which yunho tops

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mandapandabug September 30 2007, 01:51:36 UTC
i'm sorry, but i'm in with the norm... Yunho tops... but... it's more like a battle... sometimes he could bottem, but Jae is the pregnant one so... Jae lost the battle in the lauyndry room (probably because he just got out of a paralized state XDXDXD) but if you want, i could have some Jae being the man... i can't really see that happening, but with bitchy Jae... who knows. ^_~ it doesn't really matter because i won't be going into detail about the sex... i'm not that bad... and i'm too crazy to even think about writing somehting that dirty (just reading it XDXDXDXD) THANK YOU FOR COMMENTING!!!

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susiegrl September 29 2007, 02:31:22 UTC
chears~
poor yunho getting slaped -_-'
wow jae sure did get distracted but its yunho! who wouldn't lol >.<

can't wait for the next part ^^

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mandapandabug September 30 2007, 01:46:19 UTC
you can't wait??!??!?! neither can i!!! what do you think.. should i explain how he got pregnant? i think i could make that funny... but i think it would be funny to just not explain it... like how the hell did that happen?!?!?! i dunno, but it's your fault and you are going to pay... hmmm i think i know that to do!!! thank you for the help!!! and the comment. you are so cool! and so it Jaeho... cheers!!!!

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