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[mandarin226]

Finally! It's a short one and I do feel that this story could be a lot better if I had lots of time because I always seem to be two steps behind. So I need to apologise for not making it better than it is but I hope the story still shines through.

But part 15 is underway

Comments

[kindredspirit75]

Oh,no! Liam's already turned? Will and Doyle are too late, aren't they? I knew it!

*sniffle* You have to make it better, you know, so I will be fingering my worry beads furiously until the next chapter is up.

Great work, my love. Lots of tension here and a nice cliffhanger.

((hugs)) and *smoochies*

[mandarin226]

Bad, isn't it, Sweetheart? Will and Doyle are too late.

But I can fix it! Yes I can!! But keep fingering the worry beads for a bit yet!!

Thank you so much, my darling! Your feedback means everything to me and I hope I don't disappoint with what's to come!

*hugs and smoochies backatcha*

[ebonyflames]

Well personally I have to say that the pair of you were in trouble!!! Two stories that end on a cliff hanger - Midnight & Roses - grr and here - poor Liam - he is way too sweet to be a beast...

Am hoping that it will live up to its name and all will be well with a kiss... but then I am a romantic at heart

Love eet - me wants more pls pls pls

*flutters eyelashes sweetly*

pls

[mandarin226]

OMG!! The fluttering eyelashes!! I cannot compete with the power of the fluttering eyelashes!!

A kiss you say? Wouldn't that be lovely? I'll have a word with Muse, see what he thinks!

Me and my soul-mate are in trouble? *gulp* But a cliff hanger keeps the punters coming back for more!! You should know, being a writer of glorious Spangely fics!!

More as soon as I can! A couple of days or so do you? Cuz I have to work, eat, sleep go to the toilet and stuff!!

But the fluttering eyelashes are very, very persuasive!!!

[aschicca]

The situation looks hopeless but it isn't right? Right? *whimpers* Oh please don't let Liam hurt Will or Doyle...he'll never forgive himself!

*pets her boys and holds her breath till next chapter* Soon please...

[mandarin226]

Yes, it does look hopeless. *whimpers with you*

But all is not lost, Sweetheart. Not completely!

*enjoys watching my favourite pupil pet the lovely boys* Best you breathe though!!

Shouldn't be too long to wait for the next one! *crosses fingers*

[woman_of_]

Oh Liam, so badly deformed, has all his humanity gone already. Was hopeing Will could take him away and care for him, but would he recognise a lover?

More soon please!

[mandarin226]

It's a bad day for the boys, that's for sure. Poor Liam; whatever is going to happen to him?

But I have a plan!! *whispers cunning plan in Will's ear*

Not going to get better any time soon though, my darling.

*hugs you tight*

[lexa4227]

Poor Liam. Already turned. Looking forward for more.

[mandarin226]

Yes, poor Liam! It doesn't look good, does it, my love? More as soon as I can!
*hugs*

[jans_intentions]

Aw, poor Liam. I hope he doesn't hurt the men when they try to help him.

[mandarin226]

But what if they have to get close to try to help him?!!! Muse thinks they might!! *smiles mysteriously*

*smoochies*