This story is not bad, but it is plain. There is nothing spectcular or uniqueabout it. I guess I'm a little spoiled after reading so many of the outrageousand unheard of plots on this site. So, take this review with a grain of salt.But, my honest opinion is that it is mediocre. I give it a C. It'sgramatically correct, just boring.
Preliminary tests are proving to be very encouraging. The laptop seems to be behaving favorably and writing projects and fangirling shall ensue shortly.
...hopefully.
EDIT: Hmm. It looks like I may have to get a new computer after all. This upsets me GREATLY.
"Ok thanks. Well do you have more stories that you wrote if yes can you write the name and send them to me because if I like this one I bet I'll like the other ones."
Wow. That doesn't even warrant a response. WTF, noob FF.net user. WTF.