I know what you mean about NC 17. I write them, I have written them but I usually don't like them. When it has to be written, it has to be written.
That being said... Dude, I love this. A lot. It was very masterfully done in that it wasn't just about them having sex. It was a deeper thing which I usually don't see in stories like this so I love that.
Also... favorite line: “I want you to have me.” He admitted quietly. Beautiful. I love it. Please don't be embarrassed by this.
Dude!! Yours is awesome!! I don't know what the FUCK I was thinking when I wrote this (and then posted it). I was on E - thought to myself 'I CAN WRITE THAT!!!' - and then...did it. Ugh
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Whoa, whoa, whoa, this is far from NC-17 smut. I am not even sure it even warrants a NC-17 rating, feels more like an R, because it doesn't get too descriptive on the account of body parts and mechanics of the act, but instead it centers more on sensations and emotions of two characters involved. Actually this is so infused in emotions that almost becomes poetic. The words used for descriptions seemed big (maybe it is just my brain) they were almost bordering on too big, too flowery, but you kept a firm grasp on them, keeping them in line, not letting the descriptions get too much.
The blending of friendship into something less than platonic had happened organically though Reita couldn’t put a time on when it had happened, though currently it was still tentative. The fact that Aoi was there at all was a side effect of random words that spilled from each other’s lips in reluctant hope that the other would latch on and make something more out of the meaning that was muted by fear of rejection.Everything about this piece was enjoyable,
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I don't mean to butt it (but I will do it anyway--I don't know who you are so it makes me feel less self-conscious to do so ^_^). But I thank you for telling Mandy all that--she needed to hear it. She's too hard on herself when it comes to what she writes.
And yes she does write more Jrock Fanfiction--here-though I think only one of those stories on there are written just by her. This is the first ever Gazette one. ^_^
Ah that's Jackie - see; she knows. Yes that's what has been written before and there will be more. No doubt at all. ^_^! I think she thinks I'm too modest to admit we've written tons and that I'm not proud enough to boldly say 'yes - yes there will be more where this came from'.
I don't mind butting in :) I guess you're welcome then, hopefully she doesn't get too hard on herself. And thank you for the link, I sometimes skim over Alice Nine fics, but don't follow exactly.
First. I know what this is. :D You know I know...so I will say this is exactly--EXACTLY--how I imagined it. :D You too apparently.
Aoi is not a predator. :D You've just proved it.
Now second...I'm never going to sleep that early again because I would have loved to have been here, telling you you were retarded for thinking this wasn't good. Or for being nervous for that matter--or thinking this is anything near the sort of NC-17 the both of us vowed to stay away from. It's not my friend--it's no where near it in fact. I agree entirely with the people above me, actually--it was more than just sex but about breaking boundaries, about discovering new territory...have you heard this before? :D
Third! Before I get into what you actually wrote...I know you. Too well. :D So I will say this (which I fully expect to say when you are around later) I'm not mad. NOT mad. You worry too much, I think this is brilliant and I'm in love with it. This is how it happened my friend--you just wrote a little sliver of history. :D Reita...is certainly
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I really enjoyed this. The... Damn, I don't even know how to phrase what I'm trying to say. This wasn't anywhere near smutty. I hope this isn't the last time you write things like this, because it was really beautiful. Hrm, I'm kind of having a hard time articulating, not that it's ever easy for me, but I'll try to get back to you when I can do so more easily.
HA!! Sibo you're the best. I'm flatted that you read it at all...you know - with no Ruki there to make sure everything was especially hot. Therefore the fact that you like it is only marginally more flattering to me than the fact that you read it at all. It baffles me that you've come on such a long journey with Jackie and I and still, here you are with us still. It just means SO FREAKING MUCH to (I will speak on behalf of Jackie right now with some confidence) us.
Beyond that you read whatever we write; and trust us - as we've asked you to do so many times.
I DON'T KNOW!!! Why am I so paranoid - it's a side effect of being crazy I think. Yes, it's weird the first time - literally the first time ever. And the worst part is I know how to I just...can't. Or couldn't - or hadn't tried; however I did take your advice as you once told me that I should try it. Poof! Tried! ^_^!!
Anyway, that freak out aside - I'm totally glad you thought it was good since you write this stuff so well; Jackie and I always marvel at how good you are at it and how we wish everyone wrote it like you and a few others that do it so well. I take it as a huge compliment. So thank you!!
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That being said... Dude, I love this. A lot. It was very masterfully done in that it wasn't just about them having sex. It was a deeper thing which I usually don't see in stories like this so I love that.
Also... favorite line: “I want you to have me.” He admitted quietly. Beautiful. I love it. Please don't be embarrassed by this.
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The blending of friendship into something less than platonic had happened organically though Reita couldn’t put a time on when it had happened, though currently it was still tentative. The fact that Aoi was there at all was a side effect of random words that spilled from each other’s lips in reluctant hope that the other would latch on and make something more out of the meaning that was muted by fear of rejection.Everything about this piece was enjoyable, ( ... )
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And yes she does write more Jrock Fanfiction--here-though I think only one of those stories on there are written just by her. This is the first ever Gazette one. ^_^
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Aoi is not a predator. :D You've just proved it.
Now second...I'm never going to sleep that early again because I would have loved to have been here, telling you you were retarded for thinking this wasn't good. Or for being nervous for that matter--or thinking this is anything near the sort of NC-17 the both of us vowed to stay away from. It's not my friend--it's no where near it in fact. I agree entirely with the people above me, actually--it was more than just sex but about breaking boundaries, about discovering new territory...have you heard this before? :D
Third! Before I get into what you actually wrote...I know you. Too well. :D So I will say this (which I fully expect to say when you are around later) I'm not mad. NOT mad. You worry too much, I think this is brilliant and I'm in love with it. This is how it happened my friend--you just wrote a little sliver of history. :D Reita...is certainly ( ... )
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Beyond that you read whatever we write; and trust us - as we've asked you to do so many times.
I just hope to never let you down. ^_^!!!
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Anyway, that freak out aside - I'm totally glad you thought it was good since you write this stuff so well; Jackie and I always marvel at how good you are at it and how we wish everyone wrote it like you and a few others that do it so well. I take it as a huge compliment. So thank you!!
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