PCA - Chapter Three: Unanswerable Questions.

[mangobiscuit]

Title: Power Corrupts - Absolutely
Pairing: Arthur/Draco
Author: mangobiscuit
Rating: NC17
Summary: In war there are no winners. Everybody loses, victors and vanquished, both. Power is intoxicating and even for the sanest of men it can be hard to resist the pull of corruption.
Warnings: Minor character death, violence, non-con, BDSM, blood-play, torture,

Comments

[greensery]

Ah, third chapter. *is pleased*

Arthur was a bit too... evil, I think. Maybe it's just understandable, but still. Both Malfoy and Arthur seem to enjoy power very much, which is interesting.

If I read correctly, there was an error: "boy on the bed", even though Draco wasn't lying on a bed. I still like the writing style. Hope to see a fourth chapter soon.

[mangobiscuit]

Oops... typo fixed. Thanks for pointing that out. :)

Arthur too evil...? He does seem a bit crazy but you have to remember that he probably wouldn't be that evil if Draco wasn't goading him. Arthur thinks his son is suffering and he's taking his anger out on a person who seems to find that thought amusing.

Thanks for reading and commenting. I'm glad you're enjoying it.

[greensery]

You're welcome. :)

Even though he's taking his anger out on Draco, I think he's a bit too evil. But then again: he's obviously gone mad.(-or already had been and his son being captured by deatheaters was the last drop.)And Draco thought Arthur "wouldn't have it in him" to hurt him, but as Arthur thinks his son is being hurt... perhaps that makes his behaviour more believable. And the fact that he's punishing Draco "cheerfully" is part of the madness.

But yes: I'm enjoying it, and this is almost as good as the previous chapters. Almost is a lot coming from me because I don't usually even like noncon NC-17. I did like this because of Arthur's crazy comments and the realism.
And this is just evil and that for brilliant:"Oh my, forgot the lube. Lucky that blood makes an…adequate substitute isn't it?"
x) I am terrible, indeed. This fic makes me talk too much, too, ignore it. *g*

Btw: your "crazy weasleys" icon is lovely.

[chin_almighteh]

Too evil?

Hmm...-thinks- Perhaps, but I sort of like Weasley Senior exercising his evil factor on Draco. It's quite amusing. >D In a sick, malevolent sort of way...

[mangobiscuit]

Well, the seeds of his corruption were already there to begin with. The power of his position as Minister having been the thing to start it all off, really. And who better to 'exercise his evil factor' on than the son of Lucius Malfoy?

Thanks for reading. :)

Love

[maracela]

Arthur/Draco is the shiznit. (That makes you the shiznit be association.) I'm still uncertain as to whether this chapter was more sexy or more disturbing. Either way, you made me make god cry.

Also, I just gave you your 69th hug; I demand presents.

Re: Love

[mangobiscuit]

Thanks for the hug, now my hug reader is laden with all sorts of smutty sexual position innuendo. hehe

Arthur/Draco is the shiznit. Thank you, I'm glad I'm not the only person who thinks so. :) As for the sexy/disturbing question, just trust me when I say this was tame compared to future chapters.

Thanks for reading, I'm glad you're enjoying it.

[mangobiscuit]

Thankyou for the wonderful review. I wondered about how quickly Arthur turned from MOM to corrupt or evil, and tried to plant the seeds in the first chapter by how enamoured he was of all the trappings of power, and how he had two sides/faces. Possibly I didn't do this well enough though.

I really hope that you keep on enjoying this fic. I too keep rooting for Draco. No one deserves the treatment he gets. ;)

[severusslave]

>thinking smugly that even Ron was bigger than that.<

LOL
though it makes one think..... just how does arthur know ron's size??

:D NICE

severusslave