PCA - Chapter One: The Best Laid Plans...

[mangobiscuit]

Title: Power Corrupts - Absolutely
Pairing: Arthur/Draco
Author: mangobiscuit
Rating: NC17
Summary: In war there are no winners. Everybody loses, victors and vanquished, both. Power is intoxicating and even for the sanest of men it can be hard to resist the pull of corruption.
Warnings: Minor character death, violence, non-con, BDSM, blood-play, torture,

Comments

[npetrenko]

Interesting story. Please write more!

[mangobiscuit]

Thankyou. The next chapter will probably be out later this week, or early next week. I hope that you continue to enjoy it.

[jamie2109]

Hey, this is pretty cool. I don't usually read anything but H/D, but I read this and it's interesting. When's the next chapter out?

[mangobiscuit]

Sorry it took me so long to reply. eep *Holds out wrist*
The next chapter is up and the third isn't too far behind.
Thanks for reading.

[jamie2109]

*slaps some handcuffs around your wrists, cos I'm like that, then scurries off to read the next chapter*

[eliminate]

Mmm...wonderful beginning. Just one thing:

"Voldemort has planned an attack on Diagon Alley...."

Wouldn't Draco refer to him as 'You-know-who'? Or 'He-who-must-not-be-named'? Even Lucius can't refer to him as 'voldemort' without shivering/trembling/et cetera...

Other than that, I am really enjoying this. I've never read a AW/DM fic before.

[mangobiscuit]

Hmmm, very good point. I'll go back and change that. Thanks for pointing that out, though in all honesty, I'm a bit of a plebe for not figuring that out myself. lol

I'm glad you're enjoying it so far. Chapter two is up and three shouldn't be too far behind... with any luck. heh

[eliminate]

S'okay, everyone makes mistakes.

And I'll go read chapter 2 soon!

[tipgardner]

Intriguing beginning. I like how Malfoy was able to act the part of the young, scared betrayer. I also enjoyed getting to see inside the minds of both Arthur and Draco. It added a nice dimension to the action.

[mangobiscuit]

Thank you. I sort of felt it was important for the reader to get a sense of what both characters are feeling, so I've stuck with that sort of format throughout.
I hope you enjoy the rest.

[greensery]

I thought I commented this already, but since the comment is gone: I love this, the characters being IC and everything. The fact that both Draco's and Arthur's feelings are told is refreshing as it is more usual to stick to only one 'pov'(-not the right word, since the story isn't actually completely told in anyone's pov, but hopefully you understand)per story. *going to reed chapter two now*