Pokemon fic: A Muddier Me

[mangobug]

Title:  A Muddier Me
Author:  mangobug 
Rating:  PG13 potentially for violence and swearing?
Verse:  Gameverse
Characters:  Silver and his stolen totodile.
Summary:  Five short fics written for pokeprompts musical flash fiction challenge.  These fics are all based around Silver growing up with his totodile.  Enjoy my terrible taste in music <3

Comments

[kouriko]

These were so cute! ♥ It's rare that people write about this relationship, and I've always wondered what it would be like!

I think this has a great perspective and nice flow. Great job. ^^

[mangobug]

thanks so much! It seems like people ten focus more on the human relationships in the pokemon fandom than the relationships between trainers and their pokemon, so I felt like doing things a little differently. :D
also, lol your icon. :3

[caddyeverafter7]

First of all, we have such similar taste in music I thought that I was looking at my own iPod *jokes*

Very cute. I've never really liked Silver, mainly because he's such a meanie to like, everyone, at the beginning of the games, but I have a new found love for him :) Great work!

[mangobug]

Thanks so much! Yeah, I have kind of odd tastes in music. Lots of musicals and random stuff, haha. <3 Thanks for the review!

[lark]

This fill has completely blown me away.

The emotion in the second fic was raw and very powerful. I love how you kept all of Totodile/etc.'s verbs very dangerous; roaring, especially. He was never cute, and that was an excellent choice throughout this piece.

Feraligatr looked down as well. The time was long past for cheerful, loving embraces, of happy forgiveness and reconciliation. He’d never learned how. I love the fact that you didn't sway into cuteness and sap here; the fact that you keep to that harsh tone reinforces that this isn't going to be easy and makes Silver's final success all the more meaningful.

This really is a lovely study of both Silver and Feraligatr, and I'm really moved by it. Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful. Thank you so much for writing this!

[mangobug]

Thank you so much for the nice comment! I spent a lot of time thinking about how to write totodile, so I'm glad that came through. :) I really enjoyed writing this, so thanks so much for the review!

[insanepurin]

Cripes, I think I'm getting teary-eyed. I loved the transition of Silver and Feral's relationship from cold & abusive army-ish to trust and love. How on earth do you get this emotion out of me? This is lovely, lovely. ;;

[keltenaasule]

Wow... just, wow. Can I start with a big "d'awwwwwwwwww... <3