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[maniac1013]

Ok, so lately I've been seriously thinking about writing a romance novel. It's weird, I'll be in the middle of class and out of nowhere ideas just come to me. My idea is, instead of writing a novel, what if I wrote a bunch of vignettes? And instead of focusing on sex, I focused on the moments leading up to it? I think this would be neat,

Comments

[brokenfaraway]

ooooo I Liked that. It had my heart racing I was all like omg XD You should develp some characters to work with and stuff. Maybe pararaphi it a little better though it was kinda hard to read as is.

[maniac1013]

Thanks for the tip, I took your advice and fixed it up. Check it out again and tell me what you think.

[brokenfaraway]

Looks nice ^.^

[pacino_babe]

i thought the ending was really good
but i think you should go into some more details about the girl and the guy
but i thought it was hot shit

[maniac1013]

I went back and added more details about the guy. Check it out now and tell me what you think.