Tea Time in Egypt

[maniacal_math]

Rose Tyler was drinking tea and eating biscuits during tea time, which, on the whole of things wasn’t that ridiculously outrageous, other than the fact that they were also in the middle of the desert.

In Egypt.

Any buildings that might have given her a vague awareness of when or where in the country they had landed had either

Comments

[asimus]

i think this is very good and doesn't desere the critisism that you have given it. you're an excellent writer and this is an excellent fic. well done have a cookie.

[maniacal_math]

Yaaay cookie! *gets milk*

[clarice_cat]

Dunno what you were talking about with the crappiness, but I don't see any. I've seen bad fics and good fics and I would definitely classify this in the excellent fic category. Therefore, you're not a crappy writer. :)

[maniacal_math]

*tips a grateful hat in your direction*

[maniacal_math]

What typos?

[maniacal_math]

Wow, I made a lot of mistakes. Normally I'm not that careless but my GOD was I sick of looking at this fic.

Thanks for the help. I'm a spelling and grammar nazi too, but I always miss something in fics. XD

[kynaii]

Sorry, no suckage here. I know sucky writing, that's when I attempt to come up with a plot or characterization. What you wrote no way resembles suckage. Keep up on the writing.