Because I can. How is this for an opening? leave comments/suggestions

[mannequin987]

The air was cool as it rustled the leaves of late summer. Through the forests’ twisting branches, dim morning light shone. The mist was settling along the ground and a young man shifted uncomfortably. There was as much motion in the woods as food in his belly. Which is to say it rumbled annoyed at the lack of breakfast. Scanning the area he

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[kithsangel]

I liked it. :)