hmm.. it seems.. short somehow. suggestions please?

Apr 17, 2006 22:28

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mannequin987 April 18 2006, 03:08:01 UTC
Working on the scene with Reid reaching the school and seeing 'Lily' and a gaggle of friends walking along. He later catches sight of her and follows to watch her uhh.. well he tries to watch her undress. The above is the result. Hmm.. I could probably have Lucas introduced as Reid andthe others get off the carts and such.. Reid will then be 'wtf.. why are you here' and I can show more about his past. :ponders: Could work.

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rvigor358 April 18 2006, 04:20:38 UTC
Simpleton is just... soooo not Lily... You should stick with Dumbass. Or if you're really against that, make up something completely different that just sounds degrading: ie. Mudblood to name an example (already in use, so don't try it)

Pretty much any word can be made degrading if you just make the characters react that way to it.

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