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[manosa]

maybe she

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[dagidham]

You are one of my favorite poets live or dead. It's weird that I found you on livejournal. I don't know you, but you're one of the few people to whom my relationship is purely admiration and gratitude.

[sinewy]

Really powerful.

my last heart beat
will be felt
by bedsheets

and

it will be
registered
numerically

fit beautifully like that.

Due to the numerous pauses, it took two or three reads for me to register the hawk died and the man was a construction worker, but I really enjoyed.