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manwithfuture

ABOUT OUR ACHIEVEMENTS

Aug 21, 2009 04:43

It is necessary for you to oblige yourself within duties. Such duties, that you don’t dare to break off it.
These are dancing, 10 kinds of sport, self-perfection, success within romantic relationships with opposite sex, Your FRIENDS (it’s very important), Your work, business, studies, discovers, trips, pubs, restaurants, theatres, parks, museums, ( Read more... )

english, notes, my ideas, my goals

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antaura August 21 2009, 00:55:28 UTC

success within relationships with opposite sex

Just curious; why only relationships with the opposite sex? That's not the case for everyone, after all.

manwithfuture August 21 2009, 01:00:32 UTC

how to correct?

antaura August 21 2009, 01:42:10 UTC

You might want to say "romantic relationships" instead. That way you won't risk alienating people who, for example, seek success in relationships with partners of the same sex.

manwithfuture August 21 2009, 09:54:40 UTC

Oh, Thanks =))) I corrected it. Good for your help! =)

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manwithfuture August 21 2009, 18:43:04 UTC

I don't understand you, sorry.... =(

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manwithfuture August 21 2009, 19:52:50 UTC

=))) Thanks, I understood =)
This userpic is more elucidative =)

dearxjessy August 22 2009, 02:44:23 UTC

Hello. (:

That is wonderful age for beginning to live IAC
First off, what's IAC? Sorry if I seem like a fool.

And it should be, That is a wonderful age for beginning to live IAC.

manwithfuture August 22 2009, 13:54:17 UTC

IAC - In any case (In any event)

And it should be, That is a wonderful age for beginning to live IAC. (I missed article "a"?)

Thanks! =) Any other mistakes?
What are You thinking about subject of note?

lemon_pencil August 24 2009, 19:19:57 UTC

Very interesting!

Just a few pointers: you don't need to captitalize the word 'you' except obviously at the beginning of a sentence. I know that in some languages you would put a capital letter for personal pronouns but we just use lower case =)

Also, I don't know if you intended to abbreviate the word but you would usually say, 'What are you thinking about the subject?'

Hope that helped. Just ask if there's anything I've said that isn't clear.

manwithfuture August 24 2009, 20:41:52 UTC

Thank You =) very much!!!!
I've understood all your corrections =)

I want to ask you about using actual word in wrong context. I think, that I've used some of words and expressions without their right context. If you think too? What's wrong?

Thanks for your answer!!! =)