That all sounds really cool! That is a lot of money for a ticket though, geeze.
Well, the entry looks pretty good. You just worded things wrong or left out words like a or used in instead of to. Also the dollar sign goes before the number, haha.
Whaa, so expensive. Good luck, though. You can do it :)
Your post looks good, really, but if you want us to be picky, these are some changes you could do;
"I want to fly in USA this summer " -> "I want to fly to USA this summer"
"2500$ are necessary to me" -> "I need $2500"
"I've had driving license 28.08.09!" -> "I got my driver's license on the 28th of August"/I've had my driver's license since the 28th of August"
"[...]and my long-time school friend in two-rooms flat" -> "and my long-time school friend in a two-rooms flat"
"It's all of news yet" -> "That's all the news so far"/That's it for now"
I could try and explain to you why some of these sentences aren't coming across as idiomatic English, if that's interesting. This is really nitpicky, though. Your post is perfectly understandable ^_^!
yeah, i want you to be picky =)) Thanks! I appreciate correcting me! all fixed =)
If it isn't very difficult for you - i would like you explain to me why some of these sentences aren't coming across as idiomatic English! it's very interesting for me =)
I'll try as best I can ^^; though it's difficult to explain why some of the sentences sound wrong. Also you should try to take what I say with a grain of salt. Yes, I'm currently studying English grammar, but I'm far from perfect! English isn't my first language either :)
With the first sentence you'd just chosen the wrong preposition for the verb ('in' instead of 'to'). Saying 'fly in USA' makes it sound like you'll be flying a plane within the US. Whereas 'to' suggests movement from somewhere else to the US. Compare 'I'll take a run in the park' with 'I'll take a run to the park
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O, beautifu! I've understood all of your explanations very well! Thanks for your comment and it's very nobly - giving these explanations to me =) (or "for me"? =)))
i think everyone else corrected everything. your english is very good though :) good luck getting the money to fly here! where in the US do you want to go?
Hello! Thank you for adding me. This is very cool, I always wanted to meet someone from Russia. I know only one word in Russian =( Can you teach me more?? I'll try and help you with English, though you are doing a great job. That would be cool! It was nice to meet you =D
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Well, the entry looks pretty good. You just worded things wrong or left out words like a or used in instead of to. Also the dollar sign goes before the number, haha.
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Your post looks good, really, but if you want us to be picky, these are some changes you could do;
"I want to fly in USA this summer " -> "I want to fly to USA this summer"
"2500$ are necessary to me" -> "I need $2500"
"I've had driving license 28.08.09!" -> "I got my driver's license on the 28th of August"/I've had my driver's license since the 28th of August"
"[...]and my long-time school friend in two-rooms flat" -> "and my long-time school friend in a two-rooms flat"
"It's all of news yet" -> "That's all the news so far"/That's it for now"
I could try and explain to you why some of these sentences aren't coming across as idiomatic English, if that's interesting. This is really nitpicky, though. Your post is perfectly understandable ^_^!
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Thanks! I appreciate correcting me! all fixed =)
If it isn't very difficult for you - i would like you explain to me why some of these sentences aren't coming across as idiomatic English! it's very interesting for me =)
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With the first sentence you'd just chosen the wrong preposition for the verb ('in' instead of 'to'). Saying 'fly in USA' makes it sound like you'll be flying a plane within the US. Whereas 'to' suggests movement from somewhere else to the US. Compare 'I'll take a run in the park' with 'I'll take a run to the park ( ... )
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Thanks for your comment and it's very nobly - giving these explanations to me =) (or "for me"? =)))
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good luck getting the money to fly here! where in the US do you want to go?
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Thank you for adding me. This is very cool, I always wanted to meet someone from Russia. I know only one word in Russian =( Can you teach me more?? I'll try and help you with English, though you are doing a great job. That would be cool! It was nice to meet you =D
-Heather
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Let's starting teaching!
Спасибо! = [spasibo] - Thank you! =)
Это интересно! = [eto interesno] - it's interesting!
Я - король мира! = [ya - korol' mira] - I'm the king of a whole world! =D))) haha
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