Challenge #8: Vacation
Title: Honeymoon Suite
Author: jeva_chan
Size: 1,345 words
Warning: Shounen-ai.
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Summer break. Vacation in Hawaii...yeeeeaah.
Note: So yeah...this is actually the first fic of its kind I ever rewritten. Nevermind that I've already written several others (most of which are Private Locked on my LJ or still on paper), this one was the first. And I wrote it last August while I was away at a friend's place and...yeah...forgive the terribleness~!
P.S. - ALL THE BLAME GOES TO ALL OF THESE INDIVIDUALS: ickaimp for being the one who got me into this pairing in the first place. neko90, fan_geek, and MOrgan for encouraging the plunnies via giving me smut and or pervy fics and such. And of course the idea came just because of a joke I made when the manycases1truth Weekly Challenge for Vacation was first posted *siiiiiighs*
"Was this your idea of a joke?"
"You don't like it?"
"Either pout or grin. It looks weird if you try to do both."
"So you don't like it."
"...scented candles?"
"Supposed to be."
"That's a lot of chocolate..."
"I read somewhere that it's an aphrodisiac--"
"Which explains so many things now."
"...so?"
"So?"
"...well?"
"Are we playing Questions Only?"
"Do you want to?"
"I like role-playing better..."
"You know what? So do I. Okay, I'm Kaitou Kid--no, that wasn't a confession so you might as well get that recorder out of your pockets--and you can be my heist."
"...your heist?"
Without a warning, there was little Saguru could do when Kuroba moved that fast, coming into his personal space and pressing his lips to his. Funny thing, he had no objection to the stealing of a kiss--until the 'kaitou' pulled away to continue with the games.
Without much thought, he reached out and caught the thief around the waist, keeping him still. At the raised eyebrow, he explained his actions, "I think I like being the detective who catches Kaitou Kid more than being his heist."
Kuroba gave him a slightly startled look that was then replaced by a smirk. "So what does this detective want to do with Kaitou Kid now that he's caught?"
"Cuff him," answered said detective with a serious nod before he moved in closer, bending down slightly to be eye-to-eye with the slightly shorter kaitou. "Then I'd want to get to know him more...find out his motives--"
"You should do that before catching him, you know," was the pointed response, though the underlying meaning of the conversation was becoming lost as the two found themselves drawing closer.
"That might be true," Saguru replied, watching those eyes carefully as the shades shifted to and from a more violet hue, "but how can I ask questions when he's constantly running from me?"
Another shift to the violet hue. "Just ask really nicely," came the witty and smug answer before there was another shift. "If you need to practice interrogations..."
The detective opened his mouth to reply and found himself quickly silenced by a mouth covering his, a tongue invading and teasing his own. It was only perfectly natural to respond this time as the thief was lingering when he usually would have been running. So he lifted a hand to place it at the back of Kuroba's head, just where his neck began and pushed it forward so that the other's head was at a better angle. It also helped to deepen the kiss, to bring them closer still.
And this time, he felt the shift rather than saw it, and he held on tighter knowing that the skittish kaitou would attempt to draw back. He didn't want the distance to be reclaimed between the two of them, and so he held on, even as he felt the hesitation in the previously vervent actions.
He pulled away only enough to speak against the other's lips. "I thought Kaitou Kid never did anything half-way."
He felt the smirk curl onto the lips against his. "I thought you said you weren't a heist," was the cool counter though the voice was only slightly winded.
"I only said what I thought," Saguru replied calmly, whispering as he restrained himself from making the next move. It was to be the kaitou who would take the lead as he had been the one who instigated the whole thing. "I never objected to the idea..."
He felt the tension slowly bleed away under his touch as these words sank in. Then, as he'd expected, the other pressed against him hader, more determined, more anxious, more excited than before. Just as he lowered his hand back to the other's waist, he felt the kaitou pull away. The distance didn't return, however, as the young man obviously had more in store. Those lips slowly made their way away from his lips, tracing his jawline before dropping to his neck.
Without much thought, he gasped and pulled the thief closer, feeling his knees weaken without his consent, feeling his head drop against the other's. He felt the other's push against him, directed to the bed behind them, even as his mind went pleasantly blank as a specific spot on his neck was first nuzzled, licked, and then lightly blown on. If he'd been in his right mind, he might have thought to ask just how the kaitou had found that particular spot. As it was, he simply followed the other's lead while turning his own into soft bites along the neck of the smaller young man.
Just when a small graze of his canine found a place that made the thief inhale sharply, he found himself falling onto the bed as the back of his knees collided with the wooden fram. The kaitou didn't wait for him to recover and quickly reclaimed his lips. While distracting him by thrusting a tongue between their lips to greet his, the other's hand drifted between them to a belt buckle--part of a piece of clothing that contained that which createdd the majority of the heat he felt.
The normally fluid and swift hand hesitated, and the claim on his mouth was relinquished as flashing eyes caught his in a questining stare. The loss of all distractions allowed him the chance to catch his breath and consider the unspoken question.
Of course, he gave his answer by pulling the kaitou down once more.
Before they continued, however, hot breath next to his ear brought the whisper, "Are you sure you want to catch me now?"
Again, he allowed his actions to speak his words, taking the other and pulling him into a roll that brought him on top of the thief. He then caught the smaller young man's lips with his own, attempting to pry them open but feeling them smile against his instead.
Damn straiught he still wanted to catch him any way he could.
"So what'd you do for the summer break, Hakuba-kun?" Nakamori Aoko was kind enough to ask, causing the one in question to pause from taking a sip from his drink.
He shrugged. "Not much," he said casually.
"Ooooh..." Koizumi Akako said slyly, coming up from behind Aoko and leering at the British detective. "You know when young men say 'not much,' it's code from 'I got laid.' "
"Well, I did go to Hawaii," muttered Saguru blandly, still not taking a sip from his drink.
Akako eyed him suspiciously, coming out from around Aoko. The young man watched her approach but was quickly distracted by the arrival of Kuroba Kaito. This might not have been a good thing as Akako seemed to be able to put two and two together and smirked. "Oh, I see," she said smugly to Kaito as he reached the small group.
The magician blinked. "See what?"
Akako laughed behind a hand while waving the question away with her other. "No, no. It's nothing, Kuroba Kaito." A wicked grin crossed her face. "Nothing at all. Come, Nakamori-chan. I have some interesting news."
Aoko futilely protested as she was dragged off, "But I..."
The two young men watched the young women leave quietly.
One finally took a sip of his drink.
"Nearly spewed?"
"Well, considering the questions they were asking--"
"Is that hot chocolate?"
"...yes."
"...so."
"Mm..."
"Yeah..."
"...busy Friday?"
"...no..."
"...movie?"
"Action?"
"If you want..."
"You buying?"
"Well, you did set everything up in that hotel room."
"The chocolate was delicious."
"I'd assume so."
"...so..."
"...we have no idea what we're doing."
"Nope."
"Glad we agree. See you tonight."
"Have fun with the chase!"
"I'll get him Friday."
"Promise?"
"Until I get an answer."
"Well, that'll be never, wouldn't it?"
"You didn't seem to feel that way in Hawaii."
"Ouch. Touche."
-fin-
...I should so totally not be allowed to write these sorts of things, but...uh...yeah...this was the first of it's kind.
Be gentle.
x-posted dc_yaoi
Author: jeva_chan
Size: 1,345 words
Warning: Shounen-ai.
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Summer break. Vacation in Hawaii...yeeeeaah.
Note: So yeah...this is actually the first fic of its kind I ever rewritten. Nevermind that I've already written several others (most of which are Private Locked on my LJ or still on paper), this one was the first. And I wrote it last August while I was away at a friend's place and...yeah...forgive the terribleness~!
P.S. - ALL THE BLAME GOES TO ALL OF THESE INDIVIDUALS: ickaimp for being the one who got me into this pairing in the first place. neko90, fan_geek, and MOrgan for encouraging the plunnies via giving me smut and or pervy fics and such. And of course the idea came just because of a joke I made when the manycases1truth Weekly Challenge for Vacation was first posted *siiiiiighs*
"Was this your idea of a joke?"
"You don't like it?"
"Either pout or grin. It looks weird if you try to do both."
"So you don't like it."
"...scented candles?"
"Supposed to be."
"That's a lot of chocolate..."
"I read somewhere that it's an aphrodisiac--"
"Which explains so many things now."
"...so?"
"So?"
"...well?"
"Are we playing Questions Only?"
"Do you want to?"
"I like role-playing better..."
"You know what? So do I. Okay, I'm Kaitou Kid--no, that wasn't a confession so you might as well get that recorder out of your pockets--and you can be my heist."
"...your heist?"
Without a warning, there was little Saguru could do when Kuroba moved that fast, coming into his personal space and pressing his lips to his. Funny thing, he had no objection to the stealing of a kiss--until the 'kaitou' pulled away to continue with the games.
Without much thought, he reached out and caught the thief around the waist, keeping him still. At the raised eyebrow, he explained his actions, "I think I like being the detective who catches Kaitou Kid more than being his heist."
Kuroba gave him a slightly startled look that was then replaced by a smirk. "So what does this detective want to do with Kaitou Kid now that he's caught?"
"Cuff him," answered said detective with a serious nod before he moved in closer, bending down slightly to be eye-to-eye with the slightly shorter kaitou. "Then I'd want to get to know him more...find out his motives--"
"You should do that before catching him, you know," was the pointed response, though the underlying meaning of the conversation was becoming lost as the two found themselves drawing closer.
"That might be true," Saguru replied, watching those eyes carefully as the shades shifted to and from a more violet hue, "but how can I ask questions when he's constantly running from me?"
Another shift to the violet hue. "Just ask really nicely," came the witty and smug answer before there was another shift. "If you need to practice interrogations..."
The detective opened his mouth to reply and found himself quickly silenced by a mouth covering his, a tongue invading and teasing his own. It was only perfectly natural to respond this time as the thief was lingering when he usually would have been running. So he lifted a hand to place it at the back of Kuroba's head, just where his neck began and pushed it forward so that the other's head was at a better angle. It also helped to deepen the kiss, to bring them closer still.
And this time, he felt the shift rather than saw it, and he held on tighter knowing that the skittish kaitou would attempt to draw back. He didn't want the distance to be reclaimed between the two of them, and so he held on, even as he felt the hesitation in the previously vervent actions.
He pulled away only enough to speak against the other's lips. "I thought Kaitou Kid never did anything half-way."
He felt the smirk curl onto the lips against his. "I thought you said you weren't a heist," was the cool counter though the voice was only slightly winded.
"I only said what I thought," Saguru replied calmly, whispering as he restrained himself from making the next move. It was to be the kaitou who would take the lead as he had been the one who instigated the whole thing. "I never objected to the idea..."
He felt the tension slowly bleed away under his touch as these words sank in. Then, as he'd expected, the other pressed against him hader, more determined, more anxious, more excited than before. Just as he lowered his hand back to the other's waist, he felt the kaitou pull away. The distance didn't return, however, as the young man obviously had more in store. Those lips slowly made their way away from his lips, tracing his jawline before dropping to his neck.
Without much thought, he gasped and pulled the thief closer, feeling his knees weaken without his consent, feeling his head drop against the other's. He felt the other's push against him, directed to the bed behind them, even as his mind went pleasantly blank as a specific spot on his neck was first nuzzled, licked, and then lightly blown on. If he'd been in his right mind, he might have thought to ask just how the kaitou had found that particular spot. As it was, he simply followed the other's lead while turning his own into soft bites along the neck of the smaller young man.
Just when a small graze of his canine found a place that made the thief inhale sharply, he found himself falling onto the bed as the back of his knees collided with the wooden fram. The kaitou didn't wait for him to recover and quickly reclaimed his lips. While distracting him by thrusting a tongue between their lips to greet his, the other's hand drifted between them to a belt buckle--part of a piece of clothing that contained that which createdd the majority of the heat he felt.
The normally fluid and swift hand hesitated, and the claim on his mouth was relinquished as flashing eyes caught his in a questining stare. The loss of all distractions allowed him the chance to catch his breath and consider the unspoken question.
Of course, he gave his answer by pulling the kaitou down once more.
Before they continued, however, hot breath next to his ear brought the whisper, "Are you sure you want to catch me now?"
Again, he allowed his actions to speak his words, taking the other and pulling him into a roll that brought him on top of the thief. He then caught the smaller young man's lips with his own, attempting to pry them open but feeling them smile against his instead.
Damn straiught he still wanted to catch him any way he could.
"So what'd you do for the summer break, Hakuba-kun?" Nakamori Aoko was kind enough to ask, causing the one in question to pause from taking a sip from his drink.
He shrugged. "Not much," he said casually.
"Ooooh..." Koizumi Akako said slyly, coming up from behind Aoko and leering at the British detective. "You know when young men say 'not much,' it's code from 'I got laid.' "
"Well, I did go to Hawaii," muttered Saguru blandly, still not taking a sip from his drink.
Akako eyed him suspiciously, coming out from around Aoko. The young man watched her approach but was quickly distracted by the arrival of Kuroba Kaito. This might not have been a good thing as Akako seemed to be able to put two and two together and smirked. "Oh, I see," she said smugly to Kaito as he reached the small group.
The magician blinked. "See what?"
Akako laughed behind a hand while waving the question away with her other. "No, no. It's nothing, Kuroba Kaito." A wicked grin crossed her face. "Nothing at all. Come, Nakamori-chan. I have some interesting news."
Aoko futilely protested as she was dragged off, "But I..."
The two young men watched the young women leave quietly.
One finally took a sip of his drink.
"Nearly spewed?"
"Well, considering the questions they were asking--"
"Is that hot chocolate?"
"...yes."
"...so."
"Mm..."
"Yeah..."
"...busy Friday?"
"...no..."
"...movie?"
"Action?"
"If you want..."
"You buying?"
"Well, you did set everything up in that hotel room."
"The chocolate was delicious."
"I'd assume so."
"...so..."
"...we have no idea what we're doing."
"Nope."
"Glad we agree. See you tonight."
"Have fun with the chase!"
"I'll get him Friday."
"Promise?"
"Until I get an answer."
"Well, that'll be never, wouldn't it?"
"You didn't seem to feel that way in Hawaii."
"Ouch. Touche."
-fin-
...I should so totally not be allowed to write these sorts of things, but...uh...yeah...this was the first of it's kind.
Be gentle.
x-posted dc_yaoi