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kyuaina96 March 26 2014, 02:57:50 UTC
THIS WAS AMAZING!I loved the story thank you. :)

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mapofwords April 11 2014, 12:19:15 UTC
Sorry this reply is late, but thank you so much for reading! :)

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fishonthemoon March 27 2014, 04:51:30 UTC
rolling on ground i can't even ;A; this is so beautiful what are words

plot is perfectly paced and characters are just right and xiuhan so cute i'm dying ;u; your writing is beautiful! every little detail, every emotion that luhan goes through i can't i just. no. *___*

“Do you know why people say stargazing is like time traveling?” i really want to say that i love love love what you did with this line. it's such a breathtaking scene and xiuhan is so peaceful here, it's so beautiful to picture them like this outside of their busy idol schedules

“Ugh, my eyes.” Jongdae slips into the seat behind them. “No bro hugs in the van please.” i was literally seeing this scene and laughing in my head they're so cute this just SOUNDS LIKE THEM and i can't. i. no. teach me how you write these guys is there a secret formula (most likely no, but i like to imagine there is and you are secretly brewing them up among rainbow bubbles and sparkling foam)

There’s that weird feeling in his stomach again. Like a thousand butterflies are trapped inside. ( ... )

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mapofwords April 11 2014, 12:21:47 UTC
You have a very pretty username.;;

Thank you so much for your long and detailed comment! It makes me happy that you enjoyed my fic, especially my characterization of Xiuhan. I was very worried about how Luhan would come across. Your comment makes me feel relieved. Thanks again for reading!

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sovereignlight March 31 2014, 11:24:53 UTC
huuuu i haven't read xiuhan for a long time and idk this gives me feels huhu ;~~;
I really like Lu Han's evolution to become ~human~

Good one ^^

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mapofwords April 11 2014, 12:22:23 UTC
Thank you for reading and commenting! :)

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thunderseok April 3 2014, 14:53:59 UTC
omg... this made me laugh, jump and cry ;__________;

And also, this left me with a question on my head: Will Luhan, ever, tell Minseok he is from Alpha Centuri? >

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mapofwords April 11 2014, 12:22:59 UTC
Your icon's so cute sooob.

Thanks a lot for reading! I'm sure Luhan will eventually tell Minseok someday. :)

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lemon_chii April 11 2014, 08:15:26 UTC
This fanfic is soooooooo good that I can cry

I wasn't expecting this sweetness tbh, but I really loved it! Thanks to yixing, the major xiuhan shipper and dude, it's me or minseok was jealous of hunhan? REALLY MINSEOK I SEE WHAT YOU DID THERE
I really freaking loved it, I think this turned into one of my favorites xiuhan fics
Thank you so freaking much for write it

♥♡

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mapofwords April 11 2014, 12:25:07 UTC
Thank you so much for your lovely comment! I'm really glad you liked the fic. :)

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