H50 Fic: Of Relativity, the Beach, and Confusing SEALs 1/1

[mara_joy]

Title: Of Relativity, the Beach, and Confusing SEALs
Author:mara_joy
Pairing: Steve/Danny
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: I don't own the pretty. I just play with them.
Warnings: Uhh…no plot whatsoever. Just fluff. Oh, and it's unbeta'd, so all mistakes are mine. Please let me know if words are missing! Does anybody know where I can get a beta?
Spoilers: None really.

Comments

[siehn]

Oh, this was beautiful! ♥

Steve's connection to the ocean is described so well, here, and I love that it was Danny making the realization.

Your Danny voice is amazing. x3

As to a beta...

You could try hawaii50-betas.

[mara_joy]

Aww...you're so sweet! Thank you so much. I was worried I might not get Danny down right, but I'm so glad you thought I did. Now to work with my Steve-muse. ;)

[finduilas_clln]

Lovely! I really enjoyed that.

[mara_joy]

I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for reading!

[4thoffive]

OK where have you been all this time? This story was beautiful and I hope you're sitting down with your computer right now and writing more. I'm waiting...

[mara_joy]

You made me laugh with your first part. Thank you so, so much! I have a few more I'm working on, as well a Holidays prompt fic I should be posting in a couple weeks. I hope I don't let you down with them. =)

[starbuckssue]

This is just gorgeous!

[mara_joy]

Thank you, thank you! =)

[crzymm3]

this was soft and sweet and calm and OMG I could see Steve's calm face and I wanted to go up kiss it too.
I think you converyed your mood very well.

[mara_joy]

It's a face worth kissing, don't you think? ;)

Thank you!