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Because Tomorrow Comes Drabble Series #4 - The Roof

May 28, 2016 03:09

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because tomorrow comes, kim jaejoong, mature, jung yunho, love, hero jaejoong, u-know yunho, kpop, dbsk yunjae, tvxq, dbsk, romance

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hyunnyb May 28 2016, 07:59:27 UTC

So incredibly sweet! I loved the awkwardness of them trying to make love on the roof:) YooSuMin ignoring them for fifteen minutes while they laughed themselves silly was priceless, these drabbles are a delight<3

marakeshsparrow June 3 2016, 04:57:21 UTC

i honestly had so much fun with this one. That's part of why it took so long--I just kept writing and writing. It suddenly struck me that it could be really funny and realistic if they had awkward, failed sex. Haha! Somehow it ended up being oddly cute... ^_^

jheana May 28 2016, 10:14:45 UTC

Awwww Yunjae are so sweet! Yoochun is so hilarious making fun of them. I'm just glad he accepted and supported his hyungs' relationship wholeheartedly. And Yunjae, next time try to be better prepared! Hahahaha!

Thanks for this 'drabble'! Love it!

marakeshsparrow June 3 2016, 04:59:24 UTC

Yeah, Yoochun totally supports their relationship, even though he likes to tease them. He can't help himself, hahaha.

And I think this was a learning experience for YunJae--they'll definitely be more prepared going forward. ~o^

kattan69 May 28 2016, 16:43:05 UTC

Yep! Having sex without lube or lotion or some other stuff is not going to work well. Another lesson learnt.

But in the end they did have something romantically involved.

marakeshsparrow June 3 2016, 05:01:50 UTC

Hahaha--they definitely learned their lesson! And, yeah, despite the failed attempt at sex, it turned out kind of romantic! I really enjoyed writing this one. Glad you enjoyed. ^_^

jaan30 May 28 2016, 19:12:35 UTC

Hahaha sorry for distracting you xD CF is a nice distraction to have though, isn't it? ;D

I love this drabble series omg! Sugarrr lol it's sooo sweet! Ahhh these two and their love<3 even their failed attempts on the roof were cute, Yunho is such a caring boyfriend aww. Yoochun and the rest tho hahahahaha omg that was hilarious😂 poor yunjae lol I think it was worth the embarrassment though haha ^^

Thanks so much for writing these!😘

marakeshsparrow June 3 2016, 05:10:10 UTC

I had to take a break from CF! I was losing sleep! And wasn't writing! Hahaha. I'm planning on revisiting it, so have tucked it away in a safe corner for now. ^w^

So glad you're enjoying these little drabbles! Yunho was super sweet in this scene! I like writing them in this time period, when our leader is so head over heels for JJ. Siiigh...

BTW--I'm finally starting work on the sequel! But may want to finish up a couple chaps before I post anything. You helped motivate me to finish working out the storyline and got me pumped to start writing, so thank you! <3

anonymous May 28 2016, 23:56:50 UTC

Ahaha,poor babies! They were totally in the mood but were thwarted by lack of lube XDDD They're so sweet and lovey dovey after though <3 (Also, I saw your comment about Fireflies. That is tooootally a valid reason to get sidetracked! I love that story so much :-D I keep checking mira's tumblr and asianfanfics to see if Mad Love has been updated!)