Written for the Stargate Second Lives Challenge, at
Phoenix Gate:
Prompt: Fiction, Character(s)/other to be given a second life: Furlings
Prompt word(s), phrase, quotation, lyrics, image, or scenario: they neither look like scary lizardpeople or ewoks, and they aren't what SG-1 expects.
Disclaimer: Stargate and SG-1 do not belong to me, this is not
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And Furlings = Ents is such a hilarious image. Bet they're cursing never trying to talk to the trees ;)
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Made myself laugh (I am easily amused), picturing Daniel squinting suspiciously at random alien trees and trying to make conversation.
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It all makes sense now. All those trees.
I LOVE IT.
And this is an absolutely delightful fic. I second what ryf said about the character voices, and the Ents, and I love the straight-up mention of the Ewoks, and the other allusions too (forest moon!) -- so much fun and meta in this, and so much of it believably from the mouths of the characters themselves, which makes me love it even more.
Yay!
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Great character voices all the way through.
Loved this bit regarding the whole new level of weirdness: They all paused to contemplate this. Then there was a general round of nods and variously audible noises of agreement.
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Really happy the voices sounded believable! Humour is always so iffy...
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Question: is it still bad grammar if no one sees it before it's edited?
I'd vote 'nay' :-)
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I'll be giving all the trees in my neighborhood a more curious eye from now on, you can bet. ; )
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I read a lot more fic than I write, and always love the kind of story where I can hear the dialogue in my head.
When I first read 'The Two Towers', at age eleven, I desperately wanted Ents to be real. Never really got over that :-)
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