[Oneshot] Underground

May 21, 2010 19:07

TITLE: Underground
AUTHOR: marciafan
CHARACTERS: Jenny Shepard, Jethro Gibbs
GENRE: Romance, PWP
RATING: M
SUMMARY: "Were you afraid someone else would get to see what you have the privilege to see?" Jibbs smut.
WORD COUNT: 1,912
AUTHOR'S NOTE: A little piece of smutty fic for my beloved friends mandovska and matteaava, because I owe them for listening to me ramble on and on ( Read more... )

jethro gibbs, public entry, jenny shepard, fanfics, jibbs, ncis

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cici1018 May 21 2010, 18:35:00 UTC
*loves this!* Nice job, dear! =] ♥

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marciafan May 21 2010, 19:08:13 UTC
Thank youuuu *grins* This comment from you made my day, really! *hugs you tightly*

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marciafan May 21 2010, 21:15:55 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked this!

And I hope it took your mind off the pain, if only for a minute *hugs you*

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mandovska May 21 2010, 22:15:48 UTC
(sorry it took so long but I'm multitasking today and we know how good I am at that..)

Awesome, hun!

The smutty part was really intense. Loved how you wrote a provoking and sensual beginning. The playful ending made for a great match. It showed a little bit of the feeling of being comfortable around each other that you mentioned up there.

And thanks for the mention xD

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marciafan May 21 2010, 23:53:38 UTC
Multitasking is never good lol. But better late than never, yes? XD

I'm glad you liked it, though! The smutty part being more intense than other smutty things I wrote was exactly why I didn't really like this, so I'm especially happy that you did enjoy it!

The beginning contained as much plot as a story like this could ever have, and I admit I giggled a bit at work while I wrote all that XD
And the ending lol, you should know me and my humorous endings by now, right? LOL

Again, thanks for the comment, hun!
Love you!

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matteaava May 22 2010, 16:48:09 UTC
Finally!
Oh dear. You should dream more often. And then I have to make you write more often.
I'm gonna grin now of the rest of the day and the people will think I'm even crazier than I really am. LOL
Me likes this very much! *nods*

"...to the eye of a stranger."
Oh, wouldn't you like to be that stranger?
ROFL

Love ya.
M.

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marciafan May 22 2010, 18:06:45 UTC
LOL you can't complain much about my dreams anymore, can you? XD But yeah, if you hadn't asked this would have never been written, so all credit for kicking my ass goes to you lol.

Jokes aside, I'm really really happy you liked this, hun! You know I'm not good at PWP, so it was kind of a challenge to write this...especially to write in only ONE DAY! *is shocked*

And LMAO, if I were that stranger I wouldn't find the force frightening, dear *smirks*

Thanks for the comment! Love you too!
M. (LOL)

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matteaava May 23 2010, 18:55:07 UTC
I have no idea really as to why you wouldn't want this on FF.net.
I've read it again, now that I finally have peace and quiet. And I still love it.
I'm in love with it.
You, my dear, are going to write much more PWP, and /I/ am going to make sure of it! *nods*

Love ya, dear! ♥
M.

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marciafan May 23 2010, 19:11:08 UTC
Well, thanks again, darling! Maybe I'll gather up enough courage to post it on FF.net eventually, who knows...

And about writing more PWP...you may have to kick my ass a lot for that to happen XD But I confide in your skills when it comes to doing that LOL.

Love you too! *hugs*

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marciafan May 22 2010, 21:44:11 UTC
Thank you very much, hun! =)

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