The Sky Is a Metaphor

[mardeen]

The sky is a metaphor
today; agnostic and packed with
Lumbering clouds
gray/black and
full of fat promises; blocking out 
yesterday/the mountains
whispering  
later/any minute now
strafing storms are sure
to teach us a lesson/blow on by
it's part of
life/death this
knowing/not knowing

Comments

[honeygirl1946]

Beautiful. Pensive. Not to mention we are having February thunderstorms today.

[mardeen]

Thank you, Penny! The stormy sky this morning on my way to work was the inspiration for this.

[mardeen]

Thanks, James. I miss my writing, too.

[mardeen]

*big smile* Thank you, Dear Poetess.

[ying_ko_4]

Astonishing, my friend. And that ending...definitively ambiguous. I love it.

[mardeen]

Well, thanks. And what of thy scribing? You are long overdue, Poet.

[britalone]

I love this Marsha x

[mardeen]

Well, hey Chris! Thank you for commenting. How is everyone over there?

[britalone]

All's well here, we're having a few very nice warm, sunny days. It's bound to change soon tho!
How's the job going? Are you and the family all together now?