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Fic: A Thrill To Be Filled (Sam/Andy)

Feb 05, 2012 12:18

Title: A Thrill To Be Filled (Sam/Andy)
Summary: Porn Battle Entry
Rating: soft R
Word Count: a blessedly short 749
A/N: a blatant rip-off of the flashback from Ch. 10 of The Witness

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Comments 6

anonymous February 8 2012, 17:34:45 UTC

Like this and it doesn't take me forever to read either ;) I can see Andy pushing Sam's a bit and getting him to do what she wants; not that he'd object to the action but floors, firing ranges, etc. take a toll on the body.

Sorry it's still a bit difficult to accept that I find a guy my dad's age attractive, thoughts will not go there easy.

margieruns February 8 2012, 17:53:39 UTC

*L* This is all in good fun. Not exactly concerned with technicalities.

And if your dad is in his late 30's-early 40's, I guess I can understand the hesitation. However, 40's is perfectly well within my lust-range.

anonymous February 8 2012, 18:55:03 UTC

My dad's 33 so yeah when thinking age differences, but Ben's wife is pretty young I think and he looks younger than he is. I guess I should read the witness if this is similar but it's a bit intimidate for those of us who are not English native readers. Personally glad to see some shorter stories from you and other good authors :) One negate I would mention though, is that LJ is banned in some places. I have friends who would love to read short stories too, but access is limited ( ... )

margieruns February 8 2012, 19:13:59 UTC

Actually, The Witness is really nothing like this post. I start out each chapter with a "flashback" into Andy and Sam's relationship (in the story) and was planning on using the setting as one.

However, if you're interested in shorter stories, the Witness is not the way to go. It's already well past 100,000 words, and is only getting longer.

I'll think about maybe doing an Andy/Chris friendship story. I think romantically, they're pretty...nonsexual. But the friendship definitely has possibilities :)

And I agree that the student/teacher relationship complicates things between Sam and Andy. (it also makes it super hot ;) )

Also, you can find many many Sam/Andy stories on fanfiction.net. Lots of them are short.

And thanks for the long replies! I appreciate them very much.

rbcrazyfan February 12 2012, 19:47:19 UTC

Wow! You outdid yourself again! This was AMAZING! I was shocked at the shortness (I'm used to the long chapters of The Witness) but you did a great job of this story.

Can't wait to see more of the Witness!

margieruns February 13 2012, 03:05:15 UTC

Hey, you're not the only one surprised by the length ;) I didn't even know it was possible. Glad you liked it :)