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marie16fh

Some Things Never Change

Mar 06, 2011 01:00

Title: Some Things Never Change
Pairing: Daniel Agger/Fernando Torres
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: This is not true, I made it all up. All names are just borrowed and they have absolutely nothing to do with what I write.
Author's Notes: Written for the caras_de_pecas Valentine's Day challenge '11. I chose the words dinner, hugs, kisses, love letters & only you. Dan is ( Read more... )

player: daniel agger, pairing: agger/torres, fandom: football, fic, player: fernando torres

Comments 43

poynterjoness March 6 2011, 09:31:59 UTC

You soooo hate Valentines, I notice it in the way you write :')

And my poor Dannybunny *cuddles*
and I guess poor FICTION Nando too *pats shoulder*

Hnnnnng, Aaron <3 o.O how did he get in this comment? :O *giggles*

marie16fh March 6 2011, 10:21:38 UTC

Is it that obvious? :')

You still hate Nando that much? But you are nice to him, so I'll give you that! Danny will be just fine, he's got Fernando ;-)

... Why am I not surprised? :D

poynterjoness March 6 2011, 12:14:07 UTC

Well, I know your writing too good and I notice when you write about things you hate.
"a giant, baby pink bow that was hung up on the wall, screaming 'Happy Valentine's!" at them with glaring, bright pink letters"
mhhhhhhhhhhhhm...

and yes, I hatehatehate him. he left me and my Danny ): badboy. FictionNando is okay...

mmmmm, *gurgles*

marie16fh March 8 2011, 21:13:40 UTC

Yeah, well, it's not because I'm single or anything *cough* *snort* *shifty eyes*

Awh. I'm still laughing about him being shit on the pitch, and that makes me feel better about it :-) At least you're okay with fictionNando :-)))

You wuuuuuub him!

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chocoholic_81 March 6 2011, 11:50:51 UTC

I love this - the desperation of Dan while watching the game "that was supposed to be me"
I love many more of this fic, but can't say more... Sorry.
My brain is infected by slime - don't know how many handkerchiefs I used the last days *urgh*

Just overall I really really like this fic!

marie16fh March 8 2011, 20:09:10 UTC

Awwh, you're sick too? :-( I know the feeling! We can both feel sorry for ourselves!

Thank you so much! x
Get better soon!

chocoholic_81 March 8 2011, 22:21:02 UTC

You too?

Get well soon, too x

marie16fh March 9 2011, 10:44:37 UTC

Yep -.-

<3

sophie_lfc March 6 2011, 18:19:11 UTC

Made my day. *_____*
You're so talented! :)
I'm a bit jealous because I have a big fat writer's block atm and i just can't write, even if I try desperately. :/
Anyways, so good. <3

marie16fh March 8 2011, 20:11:47 UTC

Awh <3 You're too sweet! Thank you so much, glad you liked it!

I'm sure you'll get through your writer's block! :-)))

sophie_lfc March 9 2011, 16:14:15 UTC

You're welcome *-*
Thanks <3

izzyme March 6 2011, 20:51:22 UTC

this was so unexpected! I love visiting your LJ and getting surprises like these :') The story is cute and original (I like original stories, oh yes) and well written, as usual :D <3

marie16fh March 8 2011, 21:02:10 UTC

:D:D

Thank you so much! <3

alana2x1 March 6 2011, 22:47:00 UTC

Awww that was so bittersweet and lovely. Poor Dan got a lot of rough treatment in this though. Made an orphan at an early age, had his dreams dashed at an early age, and lost (albeit temporaily in the end) the love of his life too. And he had a shitty apartment. But at least he liked his job, lol. Still, his delayed relationship was pretty much his own fault though. Running off after handing over the note, silly boy.

Loved the scene between them in the coffee shop though, hahaha. Can totally just imagine everyone staring at Fernando as he yells at this guy that totally blanked him on purpose, ahaha. Brilliant!

Lovely fic. Had all the right components in it for me, heh. Cheered me up big time too since I currently have a stupidly swollen, sore face, which is due to a suspected case of Mumps. What's the point of having a vaccine for something and then getting it anyway? Bah.

Anyways, yes, loved it! :D

marie16fh March 8 2011, 21:06:48 UTC

Yes, he didn't have it easy. Especially when he found out he was injured and that it would be too rough on his body to play. That was the one good thing he had! I can't imagine what it would be like not having your parents growing up, luckily mine are around. That was his own fault indeed, he should've stayed! Too scared, little one!

I would've been in total shock if I ever witnessed something like that. And would've been awesome :D

Yeah, read what you wrote on your journal! Poor you :-( That's so true, what the %#$& is the point of taking a vaccine if it doesn't work? -.- Hope you get better soon *hugs*

Thank you so much <3