Comments | marie16fh: Unsound

marie16fh

Unsound

Mar 31, 2011 22:26

Title: Unsound
Pairing: Daniel Agger/Fernando Torres
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: This is all just a work of fiction!
Author's Note: AU. Angst. ...it's different than how I usually write. Maybe this just makes sense in my head and you guys won't understand squat? I don't know. Tell me?
Summary: Fernando questioned whether it was worth it. Every time he ( Read more... )

player: daniel agger, pairing: agger/torres, fandom: football, fic, player: fernando torres

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marie16fh April 1 2011, 14:09:47 UTC

Oh, good :-)

Thanks for reading ♥

paperflowwer March 31 2011, 20:44:28 UTC

you make me cry

marie16fh April 1 2011, 14:10:01 UTC

*hugs* :-(

Thanks for reading ♥

poynterjoness March 31 2011, 20:45:32 UTC

))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))):
I hate your angst )))))): it always makes my heart ache )))))):
))))))))):
I'm lying in bed, pouting like crazy for myself...

marie16fh April 1 2011, 14:22:10 UTC

*hugshugshugs*

*gives you Nick* cuddle this.

You read it though :D You sometimes say you refuse to read my angst, but thanks for doing it ♥

poynterjoness April 1 2011, 15:27:02 UTC

*cuddles Nicky while pouting*

This was almost worse than when you killed Dan twice and Nick once. But this was so heartbreaking because it was kinda cute, and Dan was so oblivious.. )))))))))))))))):
*sniffs*

marie16fh April 1 2011, 17:53:07 UTC

Awwwh, you liked it ♥ I feel bad for Nando too, because he doesn't know what is going on in Dan's head, he just knows that he's a part of it. At least Dan is happy... :/

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kiaretta985 March 31 2011, 20:45:57 UTC

I'm about to cry... really

marie16fh April 1 2011, 14:10:20 UTC

Awwh *hugs* :-(

Thanks for reading though ♥

vicky86x March 31 2011, 21:14:57 UTC

woooow, this is truly angsty and kind of depressing, but the story and the way you write it, is sooooo great. The different perspectives of Dan - who live in his own happy world- and Fernando - who finds it hard to handle the situation- is heartbreaking and awesome at the same time.

It's really something else, but I love the idea of it and I think you managed to get this across really, really well :)

marie16fh April 1 2011, 14:21:02 UTC

I'm so glad you actually liked it! And I'm happy I managed to get everything across, lol, it could've just ended up a big, fat mess! It made sense to me, but y'know, I had it all in my mind what went down. You guys could've ended up not understanding and just 'what is she doing...?' :')

Thanks so much for reading ♥