Who has to know? (part two)

[marie16fh]

Title: Who has to know? (part two)
Pairing: Daniel Agger/Fernando Torres, Martin Skrtel
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: This is not true, I made it all up.
Author's Notes: Here is part one. Either this is good, or I should've just left it where I ended the first :p Whatever, it's out there now!
Wordcount: 1,771
Summary: After what happened that night Dan have

Comments

[katiebooth1983]

Looking through the open doors Dan saw the now empty pool, and spotted a tiny, black heap at the other end of the pool. T-shirt. Get t-shirt.

Love Dan's thinking here, its just so drunk! Cant say it's not something i would have thought/done in that situation!

Soooooooooo glad you continued with this. You actually made my day. This whole thing could go one of two ways, although i'm veering on the side of hopefull as i know you are a sucker for happy endings!!!

[marie16fh]

So drunk, so carefree :D Hahaha, me neither :')

Awh ♥ You're welcome. Yes... You all know I am, so I guess the ending is inevitable. Let's wait and see :D

Thank you! ♥

[lee_gerrard]

Hey! I didn't take you long to write a sequel at all! :D

Man, such an unsatisfying end! For both the boys and for the readers... ;)

There will be a sequel to the sequel? :)

[marie16fh]

No, it didn't! :D

Yep, I guess it is, but this leads to another sequel... ;-) Cannot leave them like this! You know me, jesus, this can only go one way... *sigh*

Thank you! ♥

[duckiidoo]

Eeek. I love this. Drunk Dan is amazing and the thought of a nerdy Nando makes me giggle.

I do hope there is going to be more.

[marie16fh]

Glad you like the characters :-)

There will be another sequel, I'm very sure!

Thank you ♥

[marie16fh]

Glad you like it ;-) Haha, I never intended on writing it so quickly, but I got the idea, and just wrote it down, so there it was :')

Thank you! ♥

[monica_1986]

Hello, I like this story, it feels fresh, teenagers are always full of stories, a little lost maybe, and that thing called love is growing inside, attactive. Sorry for the late comment, since I had read some of your fics, and I really like them but never say anything, I’m a shy person and not good at English so...but I feel guilty now, hope it's not too late. And according to your earlier fics , I can’t believe you are a teenager, its a special skill to write the life you are not familiar with, right? Sorry for the mistakes in my English. And glad to see you expand it, I need to renew my comment now because you are so efficient, a new chapter, haha.

[marie16fh]

So glad you like it! :-)

No problem, I know what it's like to be LJ-shy, I was definitely like that before I started writing myself. There's nothing wrong in that ^_^ I think your English is very good! I found that being on here really helped my English, so hopefully it'll do that for you, too :D
I'm a teenager, yes, so thank you, I'm glad you think I make things believeable!

Thank you! ♥

[monica_1986]

Eventually,I found time to read this chapter . It's a pity that Dan pushed Fernando away, Fernando need more patient and Daniel need more time to handle this feeling between them, I think.
And thank you! You are so kind, Actually, I'm a internet-shy maybe, and for my English, LJ really helps me a lot, and to be honest, I made a draft before I posted...

[marie16fh]

Yeah, Dan needs to be sure enough of himself to not care what other people think. If he wants to try to be with a boy, he should, he's just a bit scared and confused. Nando is not giving up, though ;-)

It's good that you made a draft, always helps to practice :D I'm sure you will feel more confident with each comment you make on here, and everyone on here (at least of those I talk much to), are very nice, so nothing to worry about :-)