Comments | marie72: Severed Connection- Chapter 3

marie72

Severed Connection- Chapter 3

Jan 19, 2011 21:13

AN: Thanks to all that reviewed. It is greatly appreciated.

Chapter 3( Read more... )

Comments 18

kateri_e January 20 2011, 03:59:27 UTC

Nicely done, the stor seems to be progressing quite nicely. And poor Tony, doesn't he know that if he coughs there is a fanfic writer someone getting ready to put him through some major whumpage?

marie72 January 20 2011, 15:59:22 UTC

Coughing!Tony=whump...I think it's a rule! LOL...Thanks for reviewing and stay tuned.

rosebud_26 January 20 2011, 04:36:13 UTC

I'm glad that Tony has Charlie to talk to...just wish he was as open about his health as he was his feelings re:the non-invite to the party.
Tony will never learn will he? But then again, if he did we wouldn't get all these great angsty hurt!Tony fics! ;-)
Good chapter!

marie72 January 20 2011, 15:59:46 UTC

Thanks for your feedback...stay tuned!

Severed Connection 1-3 natasha_alexis January 20 2011, 04:42:45 UTC

Boxed In seems to be a watershed ep for how the fans see the characters. I know my view of the team changed after that last scene, and the fic written about it has run the gamut from justifications for how Tony was treated, and being the catalyst for Tony leaving.

There can never been enough Boxed In stories, and this one, what with how you moved the ep to post-Hiatus, actually makes a lot of sense for setting the scene for Tony to lose faith in his teammates.

Looking forward to the continuation of the story the introduction of the person from Tony's past. Thank you for posting all of the these chapters one after the other... there's a lot to be said for grabbing the readers and holding them captivated by the unfolding story.

n_a

Re: Severed Connection 1-3 marie72 January 20 2011, 16:02:34 UTC

Thanks for your thoughtful comments. Boxed In + season 6 is why I have a real problem with Ziva. I think a lot that happened post hiatus was very disrespectful to Tony and I feel so much of it was glossed over in canon. I think that is why this ep and fanfic written about it since invokes such an emotional response in Tony-lovers. Stay tuned for more...

krysalys January 20 2011, 05:34:54 UTC

Cranking up the angst and upcoming avalanche of sick. HOO-RAH.
Looking forward to more soon, please!
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marie72 January 20 2011, 16:03:09 UTC

Strap in...it's just getting started! LOL...thanks for your feedback and stay tuned... :-)

ferneberga January 20 2011, 08:45:46 UTC

Aw!!! Poor Tony badly needs comforting.

marie72 January 20 2011, 16:03:45 UTC

**hugging sick!sad!tony** He's going to need a lot more love to come...thanks for reviewing!