Comments | marie72: Severed Connection- Chapter 8

marie72

Severed Connection- Chapter 8

Jan 30, 2011 21:16

Chapter 8( Read more... )

gibbs/dinozzo, hurt/comfort, ncis

Comments 15

adafrog January 31 2011, 03:57:18 UTC

Oh, very interesting.

marie72 January 31 2011, 13:05:48 UTC

Good interesting? (goes off to run and hide) :-) I thought bringing Senior in might a little something... poor desperate Tony...stay tuned and thanks for the feedback...

adafrog February 1 2011, 17:11:58 UTC

Good interesting. I kind of like Senior now.

elfgirljen January 31 2011, 04:23:45 UTC

now there's a nice twist!

marie72 January 31 2011, 13:05:58 UTC

Thanks!

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marie72 January 31 2011, 13:54:29 UTC

Thanks!

ferneberga January 31 2011, 09:04:10 UTC

Evil twist there. Looking forward to next update

marie72 January 31 2011, 13:55:12 UTC

yes, a bit evil...(evil grin)...thanks for the feedback and stay tuned...

aunt_magick January 31 2011, 12:28:07 UTC

Wow! I did not see that coming! Poor Tony, his desperation is really showing if he feels he has to call his Father....Looking forward to what happens next.

marie72 January 31 2011, 13:57:01 UTC

He is quite desperate isn't he? Poor!sad!lonely!Tony...stay tuned and thanks for the feedback...