Comments | marie72: Severed Connection- Chapter 11

marie72

Severed Connection- Chapter 11

Feb 06, 2011 21:28

Chapter 11( Read more... )

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laura_trekkie February 7 2011, 10:35:56 UTC

Well, Gibbs has certainly given the team some food for thought. I'd hoped he would be harder on them, for my own personal dislike of what they did, but I guess he's being fair by taking on his own portion of blame and it would've been hypocritical of him to yell at the others too much. He's told them how good an agent Tony is, so I'm happy about that.

I'm also happy that Tony's dad is doing all he can to put Tony's mind at ease and rebuild what he threw away. I like that he's letting things go at Tony's pace and isn't allowing his business dealings to get in the way of spending time with Tony. A vacation in the sun could be just what Tony needs to start putting himself back together, without all the memories associated with the family home.

Laura.

marie72 February 7 2011, 12:07:46 UTC

I told another reader that I think if he yelled at them he would be a bit of a hypocrite...but now they know and now they will have time to think about it...I wanted a supportive senior because it can help Tony heal all his hurts...

adafrog February 7 2011, 14:03:25 UTC

Some sun will do him good. (I almost want him to end up with Dr. Pitt ;)

marie72 February 7 2011, 14:06:43 UTC

I know...Gibbs doesn't deserve him!! (LOL)Thanks for your comments and feedback and stay tuned!

skellig8 February 7 2011, 17:29:16 UTC

Yeah, Tony just needs time to heal and to get some perspective before he does anything. I can't wait for the next chapter!

marie72 February 7 2011, 20:00:09 UTC

I agree. I think when Tony returns he will be able to move on and forgive Gibbs...stay tuned! :-)

anonymous February 7 2011, 19:12:40 UTC

I'm really enjoying this story, I love that Gibbs made Ziva, McGee & Abby face the consequences of their actions, and nice to see a supportive senior for a change. Looking forward to seeing how you resolve this.

Chimp Force One

marie72 February 7 2011, 20:02:24 UTC

Thanks for your comments! I appreciate the feedback...

cashay February 7 2011, 22:59:59 UTC

I like the way you make Senior trying to take care of Tony =) It's really cute and different from most other stories involving him. You're writing a great story here!

marie72 February 7 2011, 23:15:43 UTC

For once I didn't want an evil Senior story (I have already written one); I wanted a supportive, contrite Senior who just wanted to get to know his son...I appreciate the feedback!