MaelströmDisclaimer: I don’t own Robotech or any of it’s characters. This fic was written for entertainment purposes only. No infringement is intended
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That's awesome Jo. When I first watched Robotech, I thought and Lisa and Roy were a couple. This is one very interesting scenario to explore.
Roy's likable albeit a tad "air-headed" (LOL). It is sad that Claudia had to die, but it was necessary for your premise to work.
I'm not sure about your plans for Rick but, if I might suggest, death is not the only and most effective punishment for denseness available :D. He can also live to regret his choices.
The action sequences were nicely described and interaction between the characters was spot on, Jo. I can't wait to read more of this story. I can't wait to read how Roy and Lisa come closer.
Thank you so much honey. The same thing happened to me, the first time I watched Robotech I though "Mmmhhh this two look so good together, I bet they'll end up together" and then Claudia appeared and they were perfect together. But I had to wrote this, and it was so sad to kill Claudia, but I had to snif snif
And don't worry I have no plans to kill Rick.
Thanks again for the review and I'm very happy you like what I wrote so far :)
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Roy's likable albeit a tad "air-headed" (LOL). It is sad that Claudia had to die, but it was necessary for your premise to work.
I'm not sure about your plans for Rick but, if I might suggest, death is not the only and most effective punishment for denseness available :D. He can also live to regret his choices.
The action sequences were nicely described and interaction between the characters was spot on, Jo. I can't wait to read more of this story. I can't wait to read how Roy and Lisa come closer.
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The same thing happened to me, the first time I watched Robotech I though "Mmmhhh this two look so good together, I bet they'll end up together" and then Claudia appeared and they were perfect together.
But I had to wrote this, and it was so sad to kill Claudia, but I had to snif snif
And don't worry I have no plans to kill Rick.
Thanks again for the review and I'm very happy you like what I wrote so far :)
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