Prompt me if you will challenge

[marieyotz]

It had been perfection for such a long time, this unseen lake on an unknown planet, where time passed by unnoticed. Here, each new day was born when the nearby sun began its climb through the dome of the sky - and in that same moment seemed to start a descent to the depths of the lake; or at least it would have seemed so, if there were anyone

Comments

[vinegar_dog]

Great story, Marieelise, I really enjoyed it and the end is chilling, which is always a plus! LOL

[marieyotz]

Thanks!

[damnedscientist]

A great little fic, well imagined. Nice and dark.

I love it!

[marieyotz]

:) Thanks!

[jacquelee]

Uuuuh Furlow! *shivers*

Very nice, albeit dark. I really love the descriptions at the beginning and the end!