Snippets of Shinsengumi Life - Punishment
[Title]: Punishment
[Characters]: Yamazaki Susumu and Yoshida Toshimaro. Mentions of Ichimura Tetsunosuke (Tetsu-kun)
[Summary]: Suzu is punished by his Sensei when he fails to do what he was ordered.
[Word Count]: 340
[Finished]: 16.November.2008
[Beta]: Not Beta-read
[Warnings]: Slight SPOILERS for episode 21 - "Battle Formation".
[Notes]: The sentence Suzu uses is a direct quote from Episode 21.
[Rating]: R
[Disclaimer]: Do not own Peacemaker Kurogane and will not make a profit out of this fic. PeaceMaker Kurogane©Nanae Chrono
He had been ordered to kill Tetsu and failed miserably.
The idiot boy was weak and short-tempered, childish even. He couldn’t even pull a sword out of its sheath! It should have been an easy task. Easier now that he knew the kid was in the Shinsengumi. Suzu’s hatred flared at the mention of the samurai group. So why, why had he not been able to do it? Why had he faltered at the last minute? Why had he disappointed Sensei?
Suzu was weak and he could see disappointment in Sensei’s eyes. He deserved any punishment.
Prostrated on the floor in humble submission, he dared say to Sensei, “my humblest apologies. I couldn’t carry out your orders. I will accept any punishment you decide upon.”
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Suzu gasped in surprise as Sensei entered his body, the musky smell of an unwashed man, heady and strong making him writhe in a strange pleasure.
But this was his punishment.
He had been prepared, teased, pinched and prodded for over an hour without being allowed any release. He was at his limit, all of his body burned, all of his skin an erogenous zone; any touch, any light breeze was making him convulse and ache, still no release allowed, but the feel of Sensei almost making him forget it was punishment.
Sensei started moving inside, thrusting rhythmically, every push hitting his that spot that made sparks of pleasure travel his body, head to toe, making him see stars.
But no release in sight. This was punishment.
Suzu knew he’d failed Sensei and there had to be a payment for the damaged incurred.
Sensei grunted his release deep inside Suzu, warmth feeling him, and he could not stop trembling, his mind blank, all the focus of his being in one place.
“You will not fail me again, Suzu.”
The rough, commanding voice had him screaming and squirming and writhing his release.
Loss filled him as Sensei slipped off of him, dressed and walked out of the wood smelling warehouse into the warm July sun.
November2007
November208©MarinLiliz
NEXT: "Training" - Tetsu spends some awkward moments while training with Hijikata-san.
[Characters]: Yamazaki Susumu and Yoshida Toshimaro. Mentions of Ichimura Tetsunosuke (Tetsu-kun)
[Summary]: Suzu is punished by his Sensei when he fails to do what he was ordered.
[Word Count]: 340
[Finished]: 16.November.2008
[Beta]: Not Beta-read
[Warnings]: Slight SPOILERS for episode 21 - "Battle Formation".
[Notes]: The sentence Suzu uses is a direct quote from Episode 21.
[Rating]: R
[Disclaimer]: Do not own Peacemaker Kurogane and will not make a profit out of this fic. PeaceMaker Kurogane©Nanae Chrono
He had been ordered to kill Tetsu and failed miserably.
The idiot boy was weak and short-tempered, childish even. He couldn’t even pull a sword out of its sheath! It should have been an easy task. Easier now that he knew the kid was in the Shinsengumi. Suzu’s hatred flared at the mention of the samurai group. So why, why had he not been able to do it? Why had he faltered at the last minute? Why had he disappointed Sensei?
Suzu was weak and he could see disappointment in Sensei’s eyes. He deserved any punishment.
Prostrated on the floor in humble submission, he dared say to Sensei, “my humblest apologies. I couldn’t carry out your orders. I will accept any punishment you decide upon.”
---
Suzu gasped in surprise as Sensei entered his body, the musky smell of an unwashed man, heady and strong making him writhe in a strange pleasure.
But this was his punishment.
He had been prepared, teased, pinched and prodded for over an hour without being allowed any release. He was at his limit, all of his body burned, all of his skin an erogenous zone; any touch, any light breeze was making him convulse and ache, still no release allowed, but the feel of Sensei almost making him forget it was punishment.
Sensei started moving inside, thrusting rhythmically, every push hitting his that spot that made sparks of pleasure travel his body, head to toe, making him see stars.
But no release in sight. This was punishment.
Suzu knew he’d failed Sensei and there had to be a payment for the damaged incurred.
Sensei grunted his release deep inside Suzu, warmth feeling him, and he could not stop trembling, his mind blank, all the focus of his being in one place.
“You will not fail me again, Suzu.”
The rough, commanding voice had him screaming and squirming and writhing his release.
Loss filled him as Sensei slipped off of him, dressed and walked out of the wood smelling warehouse into the warm July sun.
November2007
November208©MarinLiliz
NEXT: "Training" - Tetsu spends some awkward moments while training with Hijikata-san.