I listen to your favourite songs Just to keep your memory alive. Sometimes, in the past is where my heart belongs, And thus I'm scared that without you I won't be able to survive.
Love is BitterSweetlungsofliquidJune 30 2008, 03:35:33 UTC
I really like your poetry on here so far! You really need to update though! LoL! Love, and losing it...it's always a mess, but this poem and many that I've read on here, are full of pain that you seem to not really want to describe, but do so anyway...like you're just wanting to do like you say in this poem, "...I don't always remember the bad side of things..." I love that in poetry. The fact that you don't want to do something, but you do anyway...like against your will, and a lot of people don't see it, and most of the time we don't see it in ourselves when we do it...but it still happens...and it hurts us worse...makes for magnificent and beautiful poetry!! Bravo!
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i especially love these lines
I listen to your favourite songs
Just to keep your memory alive.
Sometimes, in the past is where my heart belongs,
And thus I'm scared that without you I won't be able to survive.
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I love it when you comment :)
*hugs*
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that just made my heart smile! (and I don't say that very often...)
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Hoping to read more soon!
-Tony-
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