Racheengel

[mariposa02]

Title: Racheengel
Author: mariposa02
Pairing: ot5, hint!Jongkey, hint!2min
Rating: pg - 13
Genre: angst
word count: ~ 1200 words
warning: death
Summery: The angel of revenge is on his way.

Comments

[savani_aechuh]

I'm confused...What just happened?

[mariposa02]

waaaaaaaaaaaaa!!! I'm sorry!!!it's too confusing right? I wanted to make it so that there is a lot open and so on and that the reader thinks about it!! aaaaa!! okay basically JInki went into the Shinee dorm and poured alcohol over the living room and then burned them all down and the others were not mad and also not mocking him and they stayed with him and died with him, because he couldn't run away because his legs didn't work... yeah so that's it.... sorry!!!

[ess_a_tch]

Um...so they burned? At least theyre all together! <3

[keiiru]

why would jinki do that ???
i get the story but i dont understand why he would so such a thing .

[mariposa02]

The reason in itself is kind of left for the reader to fantazise about but I though about something like he had an injury (on his leg that's why he is limping) and because of this injury (that is not healable) he can't be in/with shinee anymore and well he feels left out and misarable because the others are still working together and he can't be with them, but he is also angry because they are working without him and soo on....
sorry >.

[keiiru]

ohh .. ok !! cool !!
but its so sad !!! so they stick for one another till the end , literally ..
Great story !! Awesome !! 10/10 !!
Heart wrenching though .. *sighs*

[mariposa02]

thank you very much and I'm sorry for the confusion (urg-.-)

[mariposa02]

lmao. but yes you can see it like that. The whole story is meant to make the reader imagine some things about it :D
thanks for reading and commenting ♥

[darkqueen_25]

I love how u made this so open to ideas if what happened. I don't think it's confusing; it's short enough that it makes you think about it :) It was great dear.

[mariposa02]

yay! finally someone who thinks like that lol.
thank you

[darkqueen_25]

Ahaaha my mind works kinda differently so yeah ;) burned very well written!

[mariposa02]

lol I like your mind ;) thank you