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mariposa02

Betrayal [sequel to Soulmate]

Dec 06, 2010 14:46

Title:Betrayal
Author: mariposa02
Pairing: Onkey, Jongkey, Jongtae, 2min
Rating:pg-13
Genre: (drabble), smut?
Summery: Jonghyun (kinda) point of view of soulmate.
AN: I got this in my mind and had to write it..... I was actually trying to write some time ago but it didn't work... so beacause you guys asked me do another sequel I made it a so that it would fit in ( Read more... )

jongtae, !fanfic, jongkey, onkey, 2min

Comments 14

mariposa02 December 6 2010, 13:49:27 UTC

spot for fallegstelpa cause she was the first one to ark if I could continue this story^^

fallegstelpa December 6 2010, 16:17:54 UTC

*blink * * blink * * blink *. oh lord of mine, this story is really quite complex. this is very complicated in the appeal of what i imagined. they have a lover but they are still cheating, even though they know that they are the toys of their affair. this story has the potential to be a multi-chaptered story. i know you are very busy right now, ~you have exams and so on, besides that you have multi-chaptered story which is also not finished yet~, but if you don't mind and if you have free time i want you to continue this story into a multi-chaptered story. very sorry to bother you often and thank you for making the sequel of this story, dear. ~~~hug you tightly~~~.

melalocket December 6 2010, 15:13:46 UTC

omg bb they relationship is sooo complicated!!
everyone have they own lover but have they own "toy" too..
whata complicated thing..
khekekkekke..
but i love it >.<

mariposa02 December 6 2010, 18:13:41 UTC

thanks bb♥

blackblue_nl09 December 6 2010, 16:41:52 UTC

i think i didnt really get it. was it jjong the one who called taem?

mariposa02 December 6 2010, 18:13:24 UTC

yep♥ sorry if it's too complicated :(

neneksihir December 6 2010, 19:59:37 UTC

this is so amazing...
I admires your wonderfull mind...
Please write more...
And good luck for your exam...
Thank you for sharing this... :)

mariposa02 December 6 2010, 20:57:04 UTC

thanks soo much♥
I'll try my best!! *throwing my biology book to the corner of my room*
T_T

neneksihir December 7 2010, 02:42:19 UTC

anytime dear....
*put the biology book back*

lovelyrazel December 7 2010, 01:49:01 UTC

OMOMOMOMOMOOOO !

so jonghyun loves key and key probably loves onew ? but then jonghyun is with taemin who is cheating on him with minho but minho is jonghyun's friend- right ?

(:

this was just fantastic, nicely written & plus it made me want more .

continue it once more please - JUST ONE MORE TIMEEE ! elaborate the taemin cheating ? i think that would be just epiccccc !!

KEKEKEK; i liked it tho, bb.

<3