'You Don't Know' (Pintofest)

[marius2045]

Title: You don’t know
Pairing: Zach Quinto/Chris Pine - Pinto!
Prompt: Chris or Zach is sick and the other takes care of him
Rating: PG-13 for language. Mine, not theirs. ^^
Word Count: 2043
Author's note: Ok, if you wanna cut it down to this than Chris is not really sick. ^^ Written for pintofest, yes, but mostly it is for my dear 24_centiries because I owed her one

Comments

[24_centuries]

I am in class right now but I had to just hold in a SQUEE! when I saw your post on FB and then came over here <3<3<3<3!

ETA: will obv have to read later. Just making sure you don't think the first bit is my fb! lol :)

[marius2045]

Well, since I have a low opinion of my writing I might have to be sad that you haven't read so far. But me being me and me knowing you have school I just will sit down, drink tea and wait for fb. ^^

♥

[acacia_123]

aww so sweet! i love the h/c of this
&hearts&hearts&hearts&hearts&hearts&hearts&hearts&hearts&hearts&hearts&hearts&hearts&hearts&hearts&hearts&hearts&hearts&hearts&hearts&hearts&hearts&hearts&hearts&hearts&hearts&hearts&hearts

op waves thanks a buch for the great fill

[marius2045]

Thank you, I am so happy you liked this!

How could I not fulfill this lovely prompt?

[24_centuries]

all he wanted was go to bed, maybe call Zach and fall asleep to the sound of his voice over the phone,

Awwwwwwwww! <3! I love that! :D

Not to speak of the way he must have looked.

Imo, this would work better if it read: Not to mention the way he must have looked. I've see the "speak of" thing but I'm almost positive that's a Britishism. Amercians more often use the "not to mention". Hope concrit is OK!!

Face wet with tears and sprayed with bits of blood and tiny pebbles clinging to it as if glued on.

THIS? Is VERY vivid and omg just makes me want to cuddle him!!! Poor Chris!! :(:(:(

I don't growl, but I have been known to answer my phone as Chris did and I have HEARD that particular silence quite often :D

“Honey, are you ok?”

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!! Zach!! I can just HEAR him saying that!! YAY! \m/

I can only imagine how Zach's heart stuttered when he saw Chris like THAT and asleep! OMG!

“I am drunk and I fell and you left me alone and…”HAHAHAHAHAHAHA! I love how Chris BLAMES ZACH! That's so awesome! :D

[marius2045]

*sighs happily*

I am SO HAPPY that you actually liked my fluff, I wasn't really sure if this is your cup of tea. ^^

“Honey, are you ok?”
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!! Zach!! I can just HEAR him saying that!! YAY! \m/
SO YAY! I didn't plan this Honey part, but Zach just said it to ne and I had to write it. This is so him! ♥

Karl Cameo, of COURSE YOU GET HIM! I was thinking all the time that I have to put him in here. I so need to write something with Zach/Karl... *sighs*

I like how, by calling it Karl's "encouraging caress" you set up possibilities for previous Intimate Times either just between Zach and Karl or with Chris/Zach/Karl :D:D:D
Erm.... :D:D;D

YAYYAYYAYYAYYAY, you skipped you much needed rest, how can I repay you for that, lol! *attacklesquishes*

♥

[m_keas]

Gott... das ist soooooooo... *schmacht*
Am Anfang ist es hauptsächlich irgendwie traurig, was Chris das so zusammen denkt... aber als dann Zach kommt und vor allem, das ganz am Schluß, wo er ihn so lagsam saubert macht und so... *seufzt*
Wie gesagt... das ist einfach nur... *schmacht*

[marius2045]

Oh man, jetzt seh ich erstmal, wer wirklich auf smut steht, lol, bist schon die 2. die mich damit überrascht. ^^

Aber ich freu mich, dass es dir gefallen hat und *schmacht* ist das größte Lob überhaupt. *ggg*

[m_keas]

*rofl* Manchmal braucht frau eben etwas fluff. ;-) Mein Gehirn ist da momentan irgendwie drauf gepolt... bin aber auch immer für Ulksachen zu haben oder für Spannends (du weißt gar nicht, was ich gerade total Spannendes nebehnher so lese.. *lol* Das ist alles andere als 'smut' *kicher*)

[greenteaduck]

D'awwwwww<3

[marius2045]

:D:D:D