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bublee3 January 3 2014, 21:35:14 UTC
Months??? Seriously??? The plot is turning very interesting, I love when Ollie gets jealous :) Thanks for sharing

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mark_online January 4 2014, 12:40:54 UTC
I'm very sorry for the inconvenience and I really don't know how much time I'll have to write when school starts again for me. I'm in my last college year meaning I'll have a lot of exams soon so my workload will likely arise which is why I can't promise anything on the writing front.
I'm really happy you enjoy the story though and you know I won't abandon it.

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malugargula January 5 2014, 13:42:13 UTC
Holy crap
Ollie must be so pissed
Can't wait for him to find out she's not normal
Lol
Thanks for the chapter

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mark_online January 6 2014, 21:01:00 UTC
He's pissed but he's also irrational at the moment so he'll need a little help to understand Chloe's not being herself. It's gonna work out eventually. Thanks for taking the time to comment, I really appreciate!

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hellzz_on_earth January 9 2014, 03:23:58 UTC
Oh Mark you got me screaming my head off at Chloe, Davis and Ollie to whoop on that jerk!!!
Chloe is going to feel so bad when she gets clear of Brainiac. I feel a little bad for her because there's now way she would betray Ollie like she did in this chapter and he won't know the truth quite yet.
In the meantime Ollie definitely showed us the hero he was born to be. Defying death and rescuing the damsel.
Is Keamy really gone for good now? Get rid of one bad guy to be replaced with another. lol
Thanks for the update.
Happy writing.

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mark_online January 9 2014, 19:01:36 UTC
It's bad, isn't it?
Ollie's going through a rough time and does his best to keep coming up for air but it's hard for him, he's got baggage (some of which I haven't revealed yet). Chloe's undergoing the same thing, the only difference is that she doesn't realize it because of Brainiac and it's going to last quite a bit.
Keamy's dead and never coming back but his deal with Regan will keep coming up to bite him in the ass.
I'll do my best to find time to write and post an update as soon as I can (no promises) and you, keep giving us, writers, your awesome comments!

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hellzz_on_earth January 11 2014, 16:15:56 UTC
I know your busy with school. So write when you can, but concentrate on your studies first. Things are bad for Chlollie right now, but when they get both get back on track and where they're suppose to be. They'll be better then friends ad whoop on Brainiac, Davis and all those angsty emotions standing in their way!!!
Take care and enjoy the weekend and thensome.
Helena aka Hellzz

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ext_2376055 January 15 2014, 22:15:12 UTC
I really love this

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mark_online January 16 2014, 13:40:27 UTC
Thanks for commenting.

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