Comments | marketchippie: but, love, i couldn't hold it

marketchippie

but, love, i couldn't hold it

Oct 17, 2011 17:50

je suis le soleil de tes tropiques
pan am. dean/colette. r. 2600+
(set in rangoon. because where were they last ep; the answer is: CONSPICUOUSLY ABSENT and IN POSSESSION OF BATHING SUITS and thus...OBVIOUSLY BANGING? goin' with that. ~missing scene fic? how does one write not porn. what does one do with a show of four episodes total thus far. WHY AM ( Read more... )

pan am, fanmotherfuckingfiction

Comments 15

angearia October 18 2011, 05:56:00 UTC

Oh gah, the Colette POV is beautiful. Perfect word choice, perfect construction, perfect balance of careful phrasing that demonstrates fluency but not quite carefree. It's simple and refined and elegant and wholly present and ~aware. Words sound more meaningful when Colette says them in the show, and they sound more meaningful when she says them here.

I HAVE NOT EVEN GOTTEN TO PORN YET. HAD TO COMMENT ON THIS FIRST.

She salutes him goodbye, two-fingered and languid, and his hand smooths against her shoulder as she leaves, slipping briefly against the curve of her spine. She can feel his fingerprints when he is gone, marked in the cocoa butter, his catalogue on her body. It’s not an accident.

!!!!

Is there any part of her body he didn't touch? ~cataloguing~

(Okay, now I'm imagining his mapping out the way he touches her -- and I'm flashing back to Rodrigo in Borgias. Only, heh, no way is he the one in control here.)

half-reading a magazine through half-wakeful eyesHER SLEEPY FACE IS PERFECT ( ... )

marketchippie October 19 2011, 04:41:09 UTC

THANK YOU, I'm terribly glad to hear she rang true. (Fave with few words, she.)

vega_ofthe_lyre October 19 2011, 04:29:21 UTC

DARLING! This is not Paris, this is not a raw wound. OOF. Oh, babes, this was so sexy and perfect and feelingsy and yep: I'm pretty sure this and variations upon this were happening all the way through the latest ep. I REFUSE TO BELIEVE OTHERWISE. (Your porn is the greatest porn! I hate you!)

marketchippie October 19 2011, 04:35:53 UTC

skljdlkshgjdhf I'm glad it ~delivered (was weirdly anxious about this, which, hi, WHY NERVOUS ABOUT PAN AM FIC OF ALL THINGS) and am glad I can porn if nothing else because I DON'T REMEMBER HOW TO DO ANYTHING ELSE.

ALSO YOU ARE WATCHING THIS SHOW AND MY HEART SINGS. THAT IS ALL.

corleones November 2 2011, 12:10:22 UTC

ISABEL. WHAT IS THIS. WHY DO I LOVE THIS SHOW SO MUCH.

“Tais-toi,” she bites, arching against him and losing her English. Her hands slip beneath the band of his suit and pull him back against her, back into the shared expanse of bare skin between them, and she hears him swallow, hears him swallow whatever word was on the tip of his tongue. It was the last. There are no words that follow.

Oh, fuck you.

loukawai November 19 2011, 06:31:13 UTC

OH.MON.DIEU
I LOVE YOU! I REALLY DO!
This fic is a wonderful remedy for withdrawal symptoms! I just finished Pan Am and all I wanted was some more Colette and Dean/Colette time... Which you just gave me <3 You were hard to find but so worth it!
You write so beautifully, I'm in awe of your style, the way you make it seems so real... And you make just a little touch sounds so *erotic* GAH! No need for full on smut when you write like that!
I have two questions:
1/ Will you write more Pan Am fics?
2/ can you recommend good Pan Am fics?