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marlawentmad

The Real LJ Idol * Season 11 * Week 17 *Second Chance Week 5: Moonshot

Mar 25, 2020 15:38

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karmasoup March 29 2020, 04:54:05 UTC

I love the lyrical feel, the inspiration of reverence and romance in this.

marlawentmad March 30 2020, 22:54:25 UTC

Thank you kindly! My life went topsy turvy and I've been licking wounds. This week's prompt brought me out of the ground and reminded me to look towards the luminescence instead.

tonithegreat March 29 2020, 19:29:35 UTC

Lovely! I can imagine the border art for an illuminated version of this. It just seems like the kind of poem that would be pretty that way.

marlawentmad March 30 2020, 22:54:54 UTC

I am so glad the visuals caught you.

alycewilson March 29 2020, 20:42:01 UTC

I love every bit of this. What marvelous imagery!

marlawentmad March 30 2020, 22:55:08 UTC

I am pleased you enjoyed it!

rayaso March 30 2020, 23:56:51 UTC

This was wonderful! I especially loved the imagery in the fourth stanza.

marlawentmad March 31 2020, 19:53:44 UTC

Thank you kindly! I am pleased to paint a picture.

lost_nepenthe March 31 2020, 15:42:48 UTC

“The story she told

fell from her lips

honeyed with the

sweetness of foresight.”

This is a diamond of a line that only shines brighter due to the radiance of the entire piece. Great work.

marlawentmad March 31 2020, 19:54:52 UTC

What a compliment! Thank you from the depths. It felt good to write in the light for a little while.