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alycewilson May 23 2020, 00:49:15 UTC
I like the juxtaposition of romance and foreboding, the playfulness of it.

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karmasoup May 23 2020, 02:42:19 UTC
Holy cow, the rise of spring has never been so sexy! It never occurred to me that her dance with death - breaking through the rot of his trail, letting fall and winter go - could be so... mischievous. <3
I imagine his dance with summer probably has a completely different feel, but I'm such a lover of autumn, that would be interesting, too.

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rayaso May 24 2020, 15:54:21 UTC
I have no idea how you could write such a poem in so little time and under the pressure of a write-off. It was excellent.

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flipflop_diva May 24 2020, 20:03:28 UTC
This is lovely - so sweet yet disturbing almost at the same time. I love it!

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encrefloue May 24 2020, 21:13:45 UTC
Such nice play on that space between death and rebirth. I really liked the analogy of the nervous system to a system of roots.

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