Playing catch-up

[marlon_iv]

Here's the first little piece I did. The assignment was to write something from the point of view of a lemon, writing desk or a

Comments

[pvenables]

Very nice! I like it!

[c3n0byte]

The pacing is much better in your final draft. I like the picture this poem paints...it looks like a crocodile's spiny back, and waves.

Nicely done!